Cloud no. 9

Dec 30, 2010 07:56


1) All fills for prompts of the earlier prompt posts go in the post the prompt was posted in. No re-posting or splitting up prompts and fills.
2) Self-prompt when you post unprompted fic. (This means posting what the fill is about in a first comment, like a real prompt, and commenting on that with your fill.)
3) Try not to get too srs business. ( Read more... )

prompting: 09

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Mandelan/Campbell anonymous December 30 2010, 15:44:33 UTC
Quote by Charlie Whelan

'We're not that similar, me and Campbell. He loses his temper and threatens to beat people up. Yes, I can be a bully but I'd never hit somebody. I'd run a mile if anyone tried to fight me.'

http://findarticles.com/p/news-articles/daily-mail-london-england-the/mi_8002/is_2001_Dec_22/charlie-spin-doctor-practice/ai_n36492955/pg_3/?tag=content;col1

Because I enjoyed the fic Samaritans so much can we have another fic where Alastair takes umbrage to Charlie's bullying of Peter, because after all, Peter's his to abuse not Charlie's and by the sound of the quote above, Charlie's all talk!

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Re: Mandelan/Campbell anonymous December 30 2010, 20:04:33 UTC
Oh, that interview, that interview! XD

Samaritans!anon loves you and would be happy to write more. Could OP be more specific though? As in, are you looking for some confrontational!AC and/or Charlie being a bastard to Peter? Any potential squicks?

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OP anonymous December 30 2010, 20:53:38 UTC
Ahh fab I'm really pleased you've offered to fill this I loved Samaritans!

Great interview wasn't it? Quite revelaing about Charlie as a person. Not too sure about the blonde hair???????????

The prompt is quite vague, but I just quite liked the way Charlie suggested his bullying was verbal but he doesn't like to fight. There are no potential squicks with me, how can there be when I love Charlie so much? XD

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Re: OP anonymous December 30 2010, 22:55:12 UTC
Righty-ho *salutes OP*

If I can get it done before tomorrow, it'll be NYE party angst, but I don't want to rush. And by the by, the blonde hair isn't too bad XD

http://tinyurl.com/33wnb43

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Re: OP anonymous December 31 2010, 04:21:06 UTC
ha ha no its more of a Sandy Brown :-)

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Re: Mandelan/Campbell anonymous December 30 2010, 20:45:57 UTC
Nnng. Seconded.

Also, Samaritans authoranon, ILU. :) Keep at it.

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Fill: Louder than Words, part 1/3 anonymous December 31 2010, 03:07:52 UTC
Here's some Charlie-filled goodness. I accidentally ended up making AC the villain /: so nothing like Samaritans at least. Triggery, obviously. Probably the writing is a little dodgy, considering it's 3 in the morning. ILU2 NuLab!anon ( ... )

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Fill: Louder than Words, part 2/3 anonymous December 31 2010, 03:08:49 UTC
“I know he can’t have been the first to - breach - you.” A single broad fingertip pressed between his cheeks and Peter screamed aloud, praying that somebody would hear him over the din of the fireworks bursting in the sky. A sharp knock on the back of his head sent him reeling back to the floorboards. “Keep quiet. Or do you want me to find you a pillow to bite, hmm?” He leered as Peter shook his head and twisted his body again, but he was held fast. Peter held his breath, expecting to feel the first agonising strain of a foreign body against muscle, but it didn’t come.

There was a crashing of furniture, and the weight was gone from his body. Dazed, he staggered to his feet and found none other than Alastair towering over Charlie, incandescent with rage.

“Alastair!”

“You.” He pointed an accusing finger right at Peter’s heart, “You worthless, faithless slut. What do you think you’re doing?” Peter’s lips parted but no words came. He glanced at Charlie, who was inspecting his shoes sheepishly.

“I wasn’t- I wasn’t going to- not with ( ... )

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Fill: Louder than Words, part 3/3 anonymous December 31 2010, 03:09:48 UTC
“No ( ... )

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Re: Fill: Louder than Words, part 3/3 anonymous December 31 2010, 04:19:07 UTC
OP

Another thing we have in common insomnia (although mine is hopefully temmporary).

Brilliant fill authoranon, loved it. You managed to make a really good story out of a rather vague prompt.

Love the way you write these people, from Charlie's constant attachment to a lit cigarette, to Peter's whining, submisiveness. Alastair was written perfectly too.

Couldn't think of a better way for him to prove the difference between being all talk and not ;)

Poor Charlie though, I actually felt more sorry for him than Peter XD

Thank you!

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same anon anonymous December 31 2010, 04:31:13 UTC
I can't even spell I'm that tired....but you know what I mean. Basically I loved the fic :)

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Re: same anon anonymous December 31 2010, 12:13:40 UTC
Thanks (: really shouldn't have been up at 3 writing political porn, but there we go. Blame The Deal for my Charlie constantly smoking.

And keep prompting Mandelan (;

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Re: Fill: Louder than Words, part 3/3 anonymous December 31 2010, 14:33:58 UTC
My conscience won't let me comment on a story this fabulous with another 'nnng,' tempting as that is. ;) Give me a moment to scrape my brain back into shape...

So, I'm not a massive fan of Whelan himself, but it's impossible not to adore Mandelan. It's all so well-written, so deeply wrong and irresistably hot - but what marks this one out for me is what a gorgeous evil bastard your AC is. It's pretty horrible, really. You know that idea, of Peter getting punished for 'infidelity' - even though it wasn't up to him - that was played with but never realised in Samaritans & The Chink In The Armour and elsewhere? Yeah, I've been waiting for that for ages. This is dark, exactly what I was praying for & made me go 'eep' quite loudly. <3

Gosh, we are awful, aren't we? :3 Thank you for this, anon. Will read again. ~

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Re: Fill: Louder than Words, part 3/3 anonymous December 31 2010, 17:53:42 UTC
Thank you so much (:

I'm not keen on him either, but I'd take the dubious, shadowy characters over the polished ones anyday. They're more interesting. I was going to prompt Peter being punished for infidelity but it seems I accidentally ended up writing it here instead.

And I don't know where the latex reference came from. My earlyhours!brain is worrying me.

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Re: Fill: Louder than Words, part 3/3 anonymous December 31 2010, 18:10:24 UTC
I was going to prompt Peter being punished for infidelity but it seems I accidentally ended up writing it here instead.

No reason not to prompt it anyway! ;) In fact, I think I will. And as for the latex, your earlyhours!brain is clearly far more awesomely kinky than mine, which only throws up massive glaring typos! Grrr.

<3

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Re: Fill: Louder than Words, part 3/3 anonymous January 1 2011, 03:33:41 UTC
Man, I enjoy watching Peter get knocked around waaaaay too much. He's just so well suited for woobification, poor thing. And evil!Alastair is just so much fun, because he's got the physical strength and brutality to dominate everyone but he's also got the intelligence to use it to best advantage.

I bet Charlie's been scared off Peter much more thoroughly than if Alastair had just punched him a few times and not offered him the opportunity to rape his almost victim.

Great fill, author!anon.

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