"Falling Back into Metre," Stargate SG-1

[lokei]

Falling Back into Metre
By Lokei
Universe: Stargate SG-1
Rating: PG
Disclaimer: Believe me, you’d know if they were mine.
Author’s Note: Episode tag to “One False Step,” Season 2
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Comments

[tejas]

So... we gonna get to see Daniel challenge Jack on that "bigger" thing? :-);-)

[lokei]

*chuckle* Probably. Depending on how wicked I feel after I'm done tutoring Latin.

[tejas]

Just be wicked *after* the tutoring session, not during. :-)

[lokei]

Awww, where's the fun in that? *pout*

[read_300300]

I agree with tejas. There should be lots of opportunities for smut and/or just teasing after this story :-)

I really enjoyed this. It's good to see them all happy and playful.

[lokei]

My great and cunning betas will tell you I do badly writing body parts, but innuendo I can do. *grin* I'll see if anything *ahem* comes up on the topic.

[lokei]

It's Daniel running around buzzing like a UAV with his arms stretched out that gets me every time. I laughed non-stop for about 10 minutes last time I saw this episode. And he's just so adorably dejected when he concludes that he's had more rewarding conversations with dogs. Poor Daniel. *pats him on the head*

Teal'c was giving me conniptions. I reworked his section about three times because I had phrases like 'spoke volumes' and 'en masse' in there which are not at all part of his diction. Thank you for noticing! *grin*

[green_grrl]

So very cute! Love their not-explicitly-stated apologies.

[lokei]

They're such BOYS. *grin*

[taurigateboy]

Very sweet interaction. Loved the late-night phone call and who else besides the duty officer could it be. Was a very nice surprise, how you tied that phone call up with a bow, Daniel thinking that he fell asleep during the call.

[lokei]

Thank you!