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New chapter of "Everything"

Oct 25, 2011 09:06

Title: Everything

Author: Alesia

Rating: NC17

Summary: Logan has taken in a desperate and on-the-run Marie who has offered ‘anything’ in exchange for his protection. Logan wants everything. This story chronicles is what happens to them and their relationship dynamic as they learn about each other during the return ride to Xavier’s. It also ( Read more... )

pairing, rating: nc-17, author: alesia027, universe: au, genre: romance, genre: dark, fic

Comments 4

jenefaner October 25 2011, 19:34:53 UTC

I was so happy when I got this update. I LOVE this story!!

kittenrescue October 27 2011, 00:30:20 UTC

Enjoying the back story - and can't wait for them to return to Xavier's.

>> Well, they worked on mutants with physical mutations but if the collar was removed the mutant was likely to die in the process of instantaneously ‘re-manifesting’.<<

I've used suppression jewelry and drugs in my stories - and had ways in which their gifts could be reactived when necessary, but I've never considered the possibility of them dying as a result of 're-manifesting'. So that's a really interesting concept.

alesia027 October 27 2011, 04:06:48 UTC

I got the idea from the opening of X3 when Warren as a young child is clipping his newly grown wings. I got the impression that the wings would grow as he did. Therefore by extension the supression collar would cause physical mutations - like Warren's wings, Kurt's tale and skin etc to no longer be there and if the device was removed those physical mutations would return just as quickly as any other mutant's would. I was thinking the trama to the body would (or could) just be too much. Can you imagine the pain Hank might go through?

kittenrescue October 27 2011, 05:00:23 UTC

Hank's transformation (in the comics and the film) happened extremely fast - and yes, he experienced a lot of pain. In X3 his hand returned to normal when he got close to Leech and then became blue & furry again as soon as he stepped out of Leech's radius - but it didn't appear to hurt. But I'm not surprised that the X3 writers didn't take the pain of the back and forth transformation into consideration. See, you thought of something the professionals didn't. Of course, I think quite a few of us have less plot holes in our fan fics than the actual films. :)