What Do You Want From Me- Part 10/?,

[alexmonalisa]

Title: What Do You Want From Me
Author: alexmonalisa
Rating: R
Disclaimer: The characters belong to Marvel, Fox, and the people who made it. *sadface*
Feedback: Better than chocolate cake
Author’s notes: I didn't want to leave my readers hanging so I went plot-bunny hunting and remembered where I was going with this story.

Comments

[kittenrescue]

“Chere, it’s not possible. Kayla knows about Lena and right now Logan is trying to work on their marriage.”

Did I miss something? When did Logan & Kayla get married? I thought they were just engaged at this point.

I don't see how Marie can walk away from Logan and create a life with Remy, so I'm interested to see where you take this. Next chapter ... pretty please. :)

Hi!

[alexmonalisa]

I'm gonna go with oopsie! I'll change that minor error, and yes you are corrected, their not married. Thank you for reading!

Re: Hi!

[kittenrescue]

Well, at least you know that I'm paying attention. LOL

I'm always worried that I'll make continuity errors. So if you ever see something like that in one of my fics, please let me know.

[la_reine1206]

Can't wait for the next chapter! I definitely feel like Marie should've confronted Logan over the fact that she knows they'd try to take Lena away from her and leave her high and dry. He deserves to be punished for that, knowing he'd take the only thing that brings her joy away from her.

[nostariel]

Is there an index of all the chapters somewhere? Or is it uploaded to the archive?

[kittenrescue]

la_reine1206 - you should ask Becca to add an author tag for you ... that way people can find your fics easily.