Fic: Number Sixty-Nine and Beyond

[kittenrescue]

Title: Number Sixty-Nine and Beyond

Series: Part of the “Numbers” series

Author: Karen

Email: kittenrescue@hotmail.com

Rating: NC-17 (what did you expect with a title like that)

Disclaimer: The characters belong to Marvel, Fox, yada, yada, yada..

Feedback: Better than a fake orgasm.

Summary: Logan and Marie find new uses for the playground equipment.

Comments

[paradisekendra]

I love one-shots. Pure, simple, and to the point. Well---two out of those three, at least. *grins*

Beautiful job. I know you're not sure if you're strong in *this* area, but you describe SO well. Your detail is amazing. And by "this", I meant the detailing. You make it so clear and it's so easy (thankfully) to picture the entire situation. Great piece!

Love that he wanted her to "tell" him. :)

[kittenrescue]

Thank you for you support of this story. I appreciate it. *smooshes*

I love one-shots.

This is actually part of a series - I wrote four contributions ... but technically, they could stand alone.

I know you're not sure if you're strong in *this* area, but you describe SO well.

If you mean smut ... then it's not because I feel a weakness, I'm just bored of writing smut - I don't want to be too repetitive and there is only so many different ways you can write it. LOL

[paradisekendra]

If you mean smut ... then it's not because I feel a weakness, I'm just bored of writing smut - I don't want to be too repetitive and there is only so many different ways you can write it. LOL

I actually meant your descriptive language in general. Smut is welcome, but yes, after awhile, it gets boring to write.

[kittenrescue]

Oh ... okay - thanks. I try to be descriptive - and worry if it's not enough.

For a while there, I was the DDFH's Queen of Smut and it became expected in my stories, but I worried that I was just repeating myself. I still love reading love scenes in other people's stories though. :)