what you don't know about richard wilson is, he is surprisingly good at table tennis.

Nov 12, 2008 19:01

O HAI YOU GUYS. Laptop still dead, but now dead and actually gone, which is to say that the nice men from the insurance company came to pick her up and hopefully (?) I'll find out in the next few days whether I get a shiny new one or not. If not, I...literally don't know what I'll do. My stepdad lets me use his from time to time, for homework ( Read more... )

fic, definitely not merlin!

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strangeumbrella November 13 2008, 01:05:17 UTC
I LOVE YOUR HEAD AND EVERYTHING IN IT

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lo0o0ony_lauren November 17 2008, 18:34:05 UTC
ILU MADDIE

AND I LOVED YOUR MERLIN EMAIL SO SO MUCH, YOU HAVE NO IDEA

I AM FULLY LAPTOPPED UP NOW (OMG) SO WILL EMAIL YOU APPROXIMATELY 434554 TIMES WHEN I AM BACK FROM DRAMA TONIGHT :DDDDDD

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strangeumbrella November 17 2008, 18:43:15 UTC
ADAS;LK LAPTOP

I WILL BE BACK FROM CHOIR AT ABOUT 9.45 OR SOMETHING, IDK WHEN YOUR DRAMA ENDS BUT IF IT IT BEFORE THAT I WILL BE PREPPED FOR YOUR MANY EXCITING EMAILS, IF NOT THEN WELL I'LL JUST SIT AROUND UNTIL I GET THEM

ALSO I HEAR LJ IS DOWN FOR LIKE FOUR HOURS TOMORROW AFTERNOON. 1) WTF NO, AND 2) I WILL PROBABLY EMAIL YOU A MILLION TIMES THEN AS WELL, UNLESS I GET MY ARSE IN GEAR AND GO AND BUY SOME FOOD OR STH

(OK ON SECOND THOUGHTS I HAVE NO FOOD I SHOULD PROBABLY DO SOMETHING ABOUT THAT)

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lo0o0ony_lauren November 17 2008, 21:53:11 UTC
I FAIL AT LIFE UM NO EMAILS YET

APPARENTLY LAPTOPS REQURE MORE STUFF-GOING-ON THAN I SOMEHOW EXPECTED

~SOON SOON SOON~ PROMISE

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puckling November 13 2008, 01:44:46 UTC
Huh, really interesting structure and point of view. I like how the first and the third part puts us in the character's shoes with the use of second person (which is hard to do well, so hats off), but the middle has us looking down on them. It helps us to really understand what's going on in their heads without explicitly being told.

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lo0o0ony_lauren November 17 2008, 18:36:14 UTC
Thank you very much indeed! I haven't used second person for ages, and it does seem to polarize people, but it just felt right for this fic - so I'm ever so glad you think it worked.

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lo0o0ony_lauren November 17 2008, 18:36:35 UTC
Thank you! <3

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cribbins November 13 2008, 09:20:17 UTC
Occasionally, when there is a lot to be done, Arthur will mutter, "Here, give that to me," and lift the muddied shield or scuffed sword from Merlin's grip - It shouldn't be this heartwarming when Arthur acts like a normal human being but it is.

They're all so lonely and fucked up, poor lambs. I approve of this waste of time. You are scary brilliant at this.

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lo0o0ony_lauren November 17 2008, 18:38:11 UTC
Heeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee! YES, this is exactly how I feel about Arthur (oh god next week unf) and, as ever, I'm overjoyed you liked it. Lovvvvvvve <3

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ailcia November 13 2008, 10:01:05 UTC
ARGGGGGGGGH, I loved the middle. Like, properly LOVED it and think there should be more...

Loz, Loz, Loz, I am skiving uni because I have an essay to write in about five hours and then I have to give a presentation on it and arrrrrrrgh. But Merlin-fic makes it ALL BETTER.

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lo0o0ony_lauren November 17 2008, 18:42:08 UTC
HELLO ALICCCCCCCE, thank you very much indeed! Have you read my other Merlin fic? It's longer and better than this one.

I HAVE A LAPTOP AGAIN as of about an hour ago, but now I have to go out again AFGH and cannot catch up properly on the internets. But! When I come back I shall definitely do so, and bombard you with comments and thoughts and silliness and FORCE YOU TO WATCH MERLIN. Have you watched the one I was telling you about yet? GLOVELOVE xxxxxxx

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