This was surprisingly emotional; I was expecting to read a crack fic, but the way you wrote this was beautiful. I really felt sorry for Sakura in this piece. I think that her rant covered her feelings very well -- it was also very IC. You made her very human.
There are some brilliant lines in this fic and, yes, I loved all the innuendos. This was a very good and enjoyable read.
Yes I know, it's amazing I can do more than have Naruto fall on his face in a vat of glue and have Sasuke emo to a PopTart right? xD
I just have a lot of people I look up to and get into moods when I read their stuff. Like Lediz from YGO, KLMorgan from Labyrinth, yours, acacciabrown, and a few, FEW others for Naruto, in addition to everything else I read it's just great. Like my first Naruto fics, Sai's Woeful Analysis/All I Know, were after watching the Grey's Anatomy season finale and "Keep Breathing" came on. Seriously, you get inspired by the wierdest things (I never want to know how/when people get inspired for lemon fics though xD)...
That was a really sweet fic, with lots of awesome undertones. I really liked Sakura's explanation to Ino and how well you wrote post-timeskip Sakura. Congrats
I was thinking about this knew Sakura, who told Sai, an ANBU, to knock it off, and wondering if she would still pursue Sasuke if he came back to Konoha. My opinion says no. So, I wondered how this protectlve girl would react to OTHER girls, like Karin. Or her best friend.
I totally agree with you, I'm not sure whether Sakura would chase Sasuke if he came back either. She seems to have grown up a lot (I certainly went from hating her to being a fan). I think she would be the first to threaten Sasuke if he did anything to hurt Naruto now.
I would PAY Kishi to give me one panel where Super Strong Sakura fights Super Romantic-Retard Sasuke for Naruto. I think I would die, honestly, it's just so funny. That and Team Hebi in therapy...oh lord... and then they'd be in sex addicts anonymous, which except for Karin, they aren't at all...xD
That was really sweet! There were some really funny moments too, like when Ino said that Sakura seemed to Like how Naruto and Sasuke acted like a gay couple (maybe Sakura Does like the thought: remember her reaction to Konohamaru's Sexy no Jutsu, Boy on Boy version? Huh-huh *cough*), and the mention that Sasuke goes to a support group (that must be a sight to see!).
But it was really touching that Sakura then said that she understood the two, and that if it were Ino, she'd want to spend all her time with her as well (SakuIno!). It was then funny how the conversation shifted to Karin. Maybe they can have a threesome. XD
Subtext! Subteeext! They are like siblings not lesbians! *shot* xD Although, I always wondered why people weren't more into them--if they were boys they'd have more support than SasukexNaruto!
Well the escaped mental patients was a reference to Team Hebi, but you're right, the image of THOSE guys in support groups is so freaking funny. <3 If Sasuke lives Kishi HAS to give me at least one panel where he or Naruto are in therapy. Seriously.
InoSakuKari (?) would be absolutely...hysterical, you so know Karin would be nosebleeding all over the place and Suigetsu would be watching with Jiraiya. (Naruto: HELL YES!) Now all they need is Hinata. Like KariHina.
I don't get it sometimes. They say girls prefer yaoi while guys prefer yuri. I'm a girl and I prefer yuri by far. I mean what isn't there to like than the thought of soft skin upon softer skin? *starts nosebleeding and gets bricked*
Oh by the way, I've added to parts to my NejiHina fic writing essay: Original characters and Points of views. I'm kind of wondering why I didn't think of the second one sooner.
SakuIno! 8D This was just beautiful. The idea of Sakura and Ino becoming friends with Karin is... frightening. But endearing. It would be nice to see. Much <3 for your Sakura. Exactly the Sakura I have in mind ♥♥.
And well, it looks like I don't have to kill anyone to get more "Sakura-is-not-a-bitch-you-bitches" fic *does a happy dance*.
I HATE THOSE FICS. *breathes fire* One of things I've noticed in Naruto is that everyone, even the bad guys (Orochimaru, Zabaku, Pein, even Karin!) are not completely evil. They're just...people. Who have their own dreams and get lost and have to fight their way out with what they know
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I really like how you wrote Sakura here. That one line,Ino stared, wondering for the thousandth time how someone could be so legendarily strong and still so soft with her heart. Like an undying, persistent flower., just summed her up entirely. It was beautifully done. And I loved the hints that she's into Sasu/Naru :D
She doomed herself to me with her reaction to the sexy no jutsu. I read all this fics STILL where she's a bitch, but really, she's just "drool*nosebleed*ohhhyeahhh...." watching leering at them stand next to each other with Kakashi-sensei and Sai.
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There are some brilliant lines in this fic and, yes, I loved all the innuendos. This was a very good and enjoyable read.
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I just have a lot of people I look up to and get into moods when I read their stuff. Like Lediz from YGO, KLMorgan from Labyrinth, yours, acacciabrown, and a few, FEW others for Naruto, in addition to everything else I read it's just great. Like my first Naruto fics, Sai's Woeful Analysis/All I Know, were after watching the Grey's Anatomy season finale and "Keep Breathing" came on. Seriously, you get inspired by the wierdest things (I never want to know how/when people get inspired for lemon fics though xD)...
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Sakura's just such acute yaoi fangirl.
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But it was really touching that Sakura then said that she understood the two, and that if it were Ino, she'd want to spend all her time with her as well (SakuIno!). It was then funny how the conversation shifted to Karin. Maybe they can have a threesome. XD
I have a rather dirty mind, don't I? X'D
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Well the escaped mental patients was a reference to Team Hebi, but you're right, the image of THOSE guys in support groups is so freaking funny. <3 If Sasuke lives Kishi HAS to give me at least one panel where he or Naruto are in therapy. Seriously.
InoSakuKari (?) would be absolutely...hysterical, you so know Karin would be nosebleeding all over the place and Suigetsu would be watching with Jiraiya. (Naruto: HELL YES!) Now all they need is Hinata. Like KariHina.
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And Yuri Orgy for the win! :D BD XD
I don't get it sometimes. They say girls prefer yaoi while guys prefer yuri. I'm a girl and I prefer yuri by far. I mean what isn't there to like than the thought of soft skin upon softer skin? *starts nosebleeding and gets bricked*
Oh by the way, I've added to parts to my NejiHina fic writing essay: Original characters and Points of views. I'm kind of wondering why I didn't think of the second one sooner.
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This was just beautiful. The idea of Sakura and Ino becoming friends with Karin is... frightening. But endearing. It would be nice to see.
Much <3 for your Sakura. Exactly the Sakura I have in mind ♥♥.
And well, it looks like I don't have to kill anyone to get more "Sakura-is-not-a-bitch-you-bitches" fic *does a happy dance*.
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Sakura-chan deserves more love, dammit.
<3333 *lots of love*.
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Naruto: You're all a bunch of perverts!
Sasuke: ?
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