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Dust and Sin

Dec 26, 2011 00:37

Title: Dust and Sin
Author lizzywinks
Pairing: Sam/Dean
Word Count: 4038
Rating: R
Summary: Post hell, Sam's having a hard time controlling his impulses when it comes to his brother. AU (so no souless!Sam), early season 6.
Warnings: Some gore/horror themes
Disclaimer: None of this belongs to me, none of this is real.
A/N: Written for glovered for SPN_j2_xmas who ( Read more... )

one-shot, sam/dean, the fic what i wrote

Comments 29

glovered December 26 2011, 17:30:06 UTC

THIS IS DELIGHTFULLY CREEPY. Wow. I love that all of the details in this are so visceral and that Dean is struggling with a sense of wrongness that you think is only for certain reasons, but obviously he has this gut feeling that everything is wrong in other ways but he ignores it because this is Sammy. I just...I did not see that coming, and now I'm going to reread it. Thank you so much, I seriously enjoyed this! Very clever!

lizzywinks January 4 2012, 00:10:22 UTC

I'm so relieved! I wrote this when I was sick as a dog with a cold that lingered forever, and it was only on rereading I realised how very not Christmas-y it was!

I'm really glad you managed to enjoy it even with all the creepiness, and if I ever do finish the half done non-AU J2, it'll definitely be your second (less weird!) Christmas gift. ;p

glovered January 4 2012, 02:40:58 UTC

Bahaha. It's always amusing to read what you've written after getting over a cold. I thought it was great. I told my sisters and we all snickered, especially because I'd asked for something not too shmoopy, so this was just so perfect. Thanks again!!!

lizzywinks January 6 2012, 00:59:38 UTC

Hee, well I definitely delivered on the not too shmoopy prompt if nothing else! And you're very welcome! :D

runedgirl December 27 2011, 02:10:41 UTC

Oh ouch, did not see that coming -- the use of the television, the way it erratically throws up glimpses of the room and of Sam, was brilliantly done.

lizzywinks January 4 2012, 00:12:34 UTC

Thank you! It wasn't quite what I meant to do for a Christmas gift fic, so it's lovely to hear what worked for you. :D

calijirl5150 December 27 2011, 12:01:24 UTC

~~is confused~~

lizzywinks January 4 2012, 00:16:10 UTC

Sorry if I'm the cause!

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lizzywinks January 4 2012, 00:18:35 UTC

Aww, I'm sorry. I thought the mention of a ghost story in the summary would warn for horror-type themes, but I'll add something in about gore in case anyone else stumbles upon the fic. Hope you're feeling better now. :)

mishaphappens December 31 2011, 07:30:12 UTC

So, so delightfully awesome and creepy and may I just say that you are a master at physical descriptions? My God, the clammy hands and the description of the TV's light in the room, the thunder and lightning. Just perfect!

lizzywinks January 4 2012, 00:21:32 UTC

I'm really glad you enjoyed it because it wasn't what I intended at all. I blame not being well at the time of writing for the creepiness, but it's definitely lovely to hear it worked for you! Thanks for letting me know!