Cretin, or, Creation Erased

[lizzie_marie_23]

the beginning created the and
empty form       covered the Spirit
moving water saw the light,
divided Evening and morning

Then divide the air
                place some above
                            some below
named Evening and morning

Let the water be dry
“seas produce plants
others produce its own kind”
it happened in them
grew

Comments

[zempasuchil]

oohhhh. I love what the first line became - the beginning created the and - because sure there's the beginning but what's it there for. it's for the and, the conjunction, the addition and continuation. it's the beginning of and.

The repetition of Evening and morning! awesome!

rue the day He made the stars.
shine over and over
like how infinity and eternity are terrifying, even anything as longlived as stars is almost too much to comprehend.

you've convinced me, bible erasure is really cool. you really recall the original rhythm too, I like how you do that.