here is the second draft of Bemused.comments and suggestions, no matter how nit-picky, are welcomed, and very much needed. but i do realize that it's freaking long for internet reading ( Read more... )

I had to pick a photograph with people in it and write a scene from it.
( voici la photo. )

the assignment was to eavesdrop on people, pick out a phrase that sounded interesting, and write a story or dramatic monologue. my phrase is the last line.

questions:
how does the ending work?
any comments/suggestions?

thank you for reading.

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i finally squeezed out the rest of my play. mind you, i have many a revision in mind. the beginning is going to go through a near-total rewrite, and of course, this ending needs some serious polishing. but that's why i need comments, if you have any ( Read more... )

check out my groovy new icon! stolen from neopets. it just cracks me up. anyway ( Read more... )

more of the muse play. it's still not finished. here is the beginning.
still in first-draft mode. needs revision badly. help.

oh, and i'm not going through and putting the center tag on all the names again. it took forever. so...just pretend that the names are centered. ^_^;

thank you for reading.

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questions i have ( Read more... )