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mcdoh1902 August 20 2010, 07:31:24 UTC
I see what you did there with the introduction of music "tabs." Very clever.

BUT THE ENDING. YOU MUST CONTINUE IT. Perhaps not on Post-Its, though? :D

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storm_8 August 20 2010, 10:33:15 UTC
I agree with mcdoh1902, you can't leave it there!! And especially don't continue it on Post-its, hehe... ;D
Anyways this is awesome in so many ways I don't know where to start praising... So I'll just say this is awesome, I loved it and I sincerely hope you continue it! :)

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anonymous August 20 2010, 12:28:20 UTC
omg omg omg ITS SOO GOOD!! but why oh why the cliffhanger

please continue =D =D

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swatkat24 August 20 2010, 12:46:22 UTC
Oh, this is lovely! I'll be on the edge of my seat, waiting for more.

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mayireadtoday August 20 2010, 16:25:50 UTC
Great lines: “Let them whisper lies. We’ll live the truth.”

NOOOOO!

I really hope there's a sequel -- soon.

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