In his eyes, I find forever (6/13)
Title: In his eyes, I find forever (6/13)
Pairing : Takaki Yuya/Yabu Kota (Hey!Say!JUMP)
Warnings: A little too angsty at times?
Genre: Romance/Angst
Disclaimer: Yeah...well...I wish I owned them, but I don't.
Rating: PG.
Summary: The storyline starts from when the original Hey!Say!7 guest-starred on Shounen Club and moves on from there. Bear with me ( Read more... )
Pairing : Takaki Yuya/Yabu Kota (Hey!Say!JUMP)
Warnings: A little too angsty at times?
Genre: Romance/Angst
Disclaimer: Yeah...well...I wish I owned them, but I don't.
Rating: PG.
Summary: The storyline starts from when the original Hey!Say!7 guest-starred on Shounen Club and moves on from there. Bear with me ( Read more... )
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He couldn’t help but stare as Yabu wiped another tear off his face.
I thought that Takaki was either crying again or Yabu was. O__O;;;
“But it was kind of adorable, you ‘asking me out’ and all.”
ADORABLE!!! IT WAS INDEED ADORABLE BUT TAKAKI MEANT THE OTHER ASKING YOU OUT!!! RAWR!!! Takabu moment! XDDD
Just like if Shoon was here.For some reason, he could feel his heart sink.
NUUU!!!! POOR TAKAKI!!! Actually poor Yabu but more poor Takaki!!! Don't tell meh Yabu has feeling for Shoon! Okay I'm sorry but I'm on crack right now. @.@
“Hey, hey, don’t be sad, ne? Smile!” Yabu pasted the cheekiest, sweetest grin on his face Takaki had ever seen on him. Or, to those of you who can’t picture it, just a regular Yaotome Hikaru grin.
XDDD I was trying to imagine it and it was too cuuute!!! Yabu kawaii!!!
Yabu sighed, walked around the table and pulled him into a hug. “I mean, smile a little more, Takaki-kun.”Waaah!!! Yabu makes the first move!!! Hugging!!! ( ... )
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So cute and emotional.
This story is very deep and I am enjoying reading it.
I know bad timing on someone's good intentions.
I just want you to think about what will make you happy and go with it.
That's my bit of advice for what it's worth.
I hope everything becomes better for you.
I also hope that's not odd coming from someone you don't know.
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My name is Christina.
My belief is that you as the artist have the vision and I as the viewer will just enjoy your creation.
So I will wait to see how it goes and enjoy whatever you give me(us, the readers).
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xD, real name is Winn. My LJ penname is Rie. Pleased to meet you.
And my belief is that you and Jen brought a lot of happiness to an otherwise horrible day. So thanks for being so supportive.
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Second, IT'S TOO LATE!!! I GOT MY HANDS ON YABU ALREADY!!!!!! BWAHAHAHA!! *evil maniac laughter* The torture chamber is a really good idea. Thanks! XDDD
Now onto this chapter:
It was cute, the Takabu moments. It's so adorable, Yabu comforting Takaki, even though Yabu's the one that needs comforting. I want to hug him even more now!!! *glomps him in mind*
O.O It's Ryo!!! Eh? New toy? Don't treat Takaki as a thing! *smacks him*
Ahhh!!! I'm sorry if my comment was the one that made you feel worse!! I'M SORRY!!! This is going to be really selfish, but please don't stop writing this fic!!! It's one of the best ones I've read so far!!
~Ani
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.....AHHHHHHH!!! THAT WASN'T SUPPOSED TO BE AN IDEA!!! YABUCHIIII! YABUUUCHIIII!!!!
Lolx, I'm glad you liked the Takabu moments. There's a whole load of angst coming up next chap, so I'm kind of hoping you'll start really stuff again. And awww....I glomp him in my mind all the time, ^_^!
XD, yup, it's Ryo. Makes me want to post the next chapter in the NEWS comm as well as the HSJ one. And yeah, that's Ryo for you. No one else would call Takaki a toy.
Awww, it wasn't you OR Jen, don't worry. You guys have actually helped make this story worth writing, just by being your awesome selves. And lolx, my dear musie muse was telling me the exact same thing. Awww, that's sweet of you to say, thanks!
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XDDDDDDD THANK YOU FOR THE IDEA!!!! When I write it, I shall credit you!! JK JK, I won't go so far as a torture chamber...cuz I can't think of a reason why he would even BE in a torture chamber...
I became a Takabu fan thanks to all the Takabu angst...but now there's Hikabu...NO! IT'S ALL ABOUT TAKABU!!! *inner conflict for Takabu and Hikabu begins*
XDDD I know a bit about Ryo, from Jen and fanfics. (I think those two are the only sources I have for info on these guys)
I'm sorry!! It's just...YOUR ANGST!!! I CAN'T GET ENOUGH OF IT!!! *selfish selfish selfish*
~Ani
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So I just tracked down your past chapters (go me!) and I gots'ta say, I really like it. I think it's an interesting insight into the personal effects of a band splitting up, which I uh didn't consider before. But makes wonderful dramatic sense! And the TakaYabu, it is adorable. F'realz.
ESPECIALLY DIS:
“Just smile, Yu-chan, that’s all I’m asking.” Yabu whispered, his voice cracking slightly. “The world seems a little bit lighter to the rest of us when you smile.”
AWWW.
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xD, yay, Momochi! Really? I'm glad you do. Wow, way to say something no one else has said yet...seriously, it's nice to see a new perspective on what's going on. Lolx, I'm glad you like the TakaYabu, it's fun to write it.
AWWWW, I KNEW YOU'D LIKE THAT!
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Ahh, Ryo-chan....well, he's there 'cause...well, you'll have to check the next chapter! I'll have it up at a more normal hour when everyone can see it.
Lolx, yeah, the new PV's pretty good...I'm a bit iffy on a lot of things.
Hmm...that's a good hypothesis. But you'll just have to wait and see, ne? *winks*
Thanks for commenting!
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