In his eyes, I find forever (6/13)
Title: In his eyes, I find forever (6/13)
Pairing : Takaki Yuya/Yabu Kota (Hey!Say!JUMP)
Warnings: A little too angsty at times?
Genre: Romance/Angst
Disclaimer: Yeah...well...I wish I owned them, but I don't.
Rating: PG.
Summary: The storyline starts from when the original Hey!Say!7 guest-starred on Shounen Club and moves on from there. Bear with me ( Read more... )
Pairing : Takaki Yuya/Yabu Kota (Hey!Say!JUMP)
Warnings: A little too angsty at times?
Genre: Romance/Angst
Disclaimer: Yeah...well...I wish I owned them, but I don't.
Rating: PG.
Summary: The storyline starts from when the original Hey!Say!7 guest-starred on Shounen Club and moves on from there. Bear with me ( Read more... )
He couldn’t help but stare as Yabu wiped another tear off his face.
I thought that Takaki was either crying again or Yabu was. O__O;;;
“But it was kind of adorable, you ‘asking me out’ and all.”
ADORABLE!!! IT WAS INDEED ADORABLE BUT TAKAKI MEANT THE OTHER ASKING YOU OUT!!! RAWR!!! Takabu moment! XDDD
Just like if Shoon was here.For some reason, he could feel his heart sink.
NUUU!!!! POOR TAKAKI!!! Actually poor Yabu but more poor Takaki!!! Don't tell meh Yabu has feeling for Shoon! Okay I'm sorry but I'm on crack right now. @.@
“Hey, hey, don’t be sad, ne? Smile!” Yabu pasted the cheekiest, sweetest grin on his face Takaki had ever seen on him. Or, to those of you who can’t picture it, just a regular Yaotome Hikaru grin.
XDDD I was trying to imagine it and it was too cuuute!!! Yabu kawaii!!!
Yabu sighed, walked around the table and pulled him into a hug. “I mean, smile a little more, Takaki-kun.”
Waaah!!! Yabu makes the first move!!! Hugging!!! Too cuuute!!! XDDD I love huggles!!! TAKABUNESS!!!
“Just smile, Yu-chan, that’s all I’m asking.” Yabu whispered, his voice cracking slightly. “The world seems a little bit lighter to the rest of us when you smile.”
Yu-chan??? Waaah!!! Yabu has a little nickname for Takaki already! *squeals* Aww... the world ish indeed lighter when Takaki ish there with you Yabu!!! So many Takabu moments!!! I love them!!!
“Whoa, Yabuchii! Got a new toy already?”
Takaki looked up, cheeks burning. “Nishikido-sempai!”
That's not nice Ryo!!! Eeky!!! It's Ryo Ryo! I've started to like him ever since I saw him in two dramas. Actually he creeped me out in Last Friends but when I saw Attention Please, I really liked him. XDDD A pairing with Ryo? Uhh... RyoTego? O__O;;; RyoShige?? RyoPi??? @__@;;;
Haha I had so much trouble doing a fake-cut. I needed a friend to help me. XDDD
O__O;;; I hope I didn't make you feel terrible!!! T___T *sniffles* That's the worse thing I could ever do! I'm sorry if I ever hurt you or anything!!! *ish sad and worried* I hope you get better!!! And don't force yourself to write this fanfic! T__T *hugs you tightly* I really hope everything will be alright...
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LOLX, I was going for that response...sorry!
xD, actually I'm not sure if Takaki meant it the other way...I wrote it as a kind of actual thing. Takaki was having issues trying to figure out how to thank Yabu so he wanted to take him out to dinner as a thank you thing. But he couldn't figure out how to do it. I'm thinking I didn't do a great job of making that clear.
LOLX....the original prompt I was working with had to do with refusing to sell your soul to an imitation. So I took that prompt as more of refusing to BE an imitation. So it's kind of like Takaki's refusing to be replacement for Shoon or Hikaru or whoever Yabu's into (^_^). Also possibly as Yabu refusing to be this figure that Takaki's slowly building him up to be, and trying to show Takaki that all he can be is himself. So that's why these hints of Shoon are in there. And eventually, I'm going to work with Yabu's side of that prompt as well. But that moment was meant to start showing to Takaki what he thinks of Yabu...or building up the moment?
OMG, I'm glad that actually worked. I was a little concerned that referencing Hikaru would be too cheesy. But from watching Yabu so much, it's easy (at least for me) to notice him as someone who can be possibly as adorably goofy as Hikaru (but less noticeable...'cause it's Hikaru, come on... he's the boss goof). xD, I tried imagining it too while I was writing...and I ended up going *SQUEEEE!* for an hour.
No lie.
I'm glad the Takabuness is to your liking! I wanted to start writing in Yabu showing signs of some kind of affection for Takaki as well as vice versa...so there we go. And also with what happened in Chapter Four. Either it's that...or Yabu's just being Yabu, xD.
^_^, I actually had Dai-chan use that nickname last chapter...but I might rewrite that. 'cause you just REALLY made me like the idea of keeping that Yabu's nickanme for Takaki. Ha, it's getting easier and easier to write fluff for these guys...as I've gotten through the fic, these two (or at least how I've written them) have practically done the moments for me (in my head).
Yup! Ryo's in here! Lolx, I'm having so much trouble writing Ryo...but I wanted him in there for a reason. You'll see next chap, *winks*. I never saw either one of those dramas but I watched him in One Litre of Tears and I've adored him ever since. That and one of my fav pairings is half him. Oh and he was hilariously adorable in Summertime and Weeeek.
Nope! You're guessing the more popular pairings. Try for obscure.
Lolx, same. My best friend had to walk me through it, ^_^, I feel so pathetic.
It's actually not your fault, I swear. It's not that person's fault either, really...their comment just wasn't what I needed right now. It's been a really stressful year and the summer's just gotten worse everyday. Junior year was NOT everything I was looking for. And writing's supposed to be my escape. It's always been that way. But it just got kind of temporarily ruined for me. I'm not going to say who it was, because that'd be really mean. But I swear, it wasn't you. You and Ani have actually made writing this incredibly enjoyable and every time I post, the first thing I look forward to is seeing one of you guys comment me. And thanks for the support. It just came at a really bad time. I spent two hours crying on the phone with one of my closest friends at 2 in the morning and my insomnia's been driving me up the wall so waking up after only 3 hours of sleep in three days to getting another comment that pretty much made me feel even worse was NOT how I wanted to start the morning.
Thanks for thinking of me, Jen, it means a lot. I'm sorry for worrying you!
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Haha really? It totally got me there! XPPP
Oh I see... O.O;;; It could mean another thing but just come out weird... Takaki was having issues. Pfft! For some reason, that amuses meh. No no it's alright! A fan like meh, goes into umm.. conclusions too much? Like... I think it's this certain way but in reality it's another? XDDD Like Takaki ish not in love with Yabu yet... or hasn't realized it?
O__O;;; That sounds kinda scary... And yeah I can tell... You can't be a replacement for a person! Takaki can never be a replacement, Yabu! Get that through your head!!! Ah I see... kinda confusing but it's pretty deep. XDDD Ooh... Yabu's perspective? I will be looking forward to that!
Of course it works! If you're a HSJ fan like meh! XPPP I do admit, I pay attention to Takaki the most but I watch the other members, too! The smile ish cuuute! Not cheesy!!! Squee!!! Now I want to pinch Yabu's cheeks. O.O;;
Yushy!!! Yabu having those cute affections ish just too *SQUEALS* Yabu could just be being Yabu... now if Yabu were to hug everyone in RL... *___* *weird thoughts*
Oh yeah... oopsies! @__@;;; I was paying more attention to the Takabuness. XPPP I think I shall be using that word from now on! I did??? Yayness!!! I'm not sure if I'm good at fluff but Ani keeps on saying, you're good at it! I can't write fluff! She's probably better at torturing and uhh... angst. XP As you can tell.
Hi hi Ryo! XDDD I'll see? Oh darn! T__T I shall wait! XP Aww.. I'm avoiding 1 Litre of Tears since I heard it was really sad... I don't want to cry that much!!! I like those two PVs!!! So hyper!!! Heehee...
Oh darn! Too popular? RyoJin? Wait.. that's popular. RyoKame... wait.. that sounds weird. RyoMassu? O.O;;; Ryoda? Why am I'm thinking of Kat-tun with NEWS? Wait... I dunno! Lemme think some more. RyoKoyama? @__@;;; *dies from thinking too much*
I was such a noob even though I had livejournal for like uhh.. months? I don't remember... I felt that way too!
T__T Aww... T__T *hugs you tightly* Junior year ish gonna be hell for meh... Imma die!!! It did? That sucks... I dunno how to help!!! I'm bad at comforting people!!! *sniffles* I feel so useless... Oh really? That's very sweet of you!!! Ani says that I'm writing an essay whenever she sees these long comments. I make long comments at certain fanfics. XPPP I will support you all the way! Ani too! Really??? Crying??? T__T *worried even more* I really hope you feel better! Somehow!!! I wish I could give you a hug now!!! No it's alright!!! You're an awesome friend!!!
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I think it's going to get a lot of people there, ^_^!
Yeah...like you know how if you get really nervous about something, sometimes you blurt something out but it's not what you mean? Kind of like that. ^_^, don't worry...I was kind of hoping it'd be actually asking him out...the story didn't want to be written like that though, *winks*. Yup, like that. Actually, I'm a big fan of slow development stuff...it's why I normally hate one-shots. But I started out writing this as a series of one-shots...somehow it wrote itself into a normal multi-chapter story. He's starting to fall a little bit for Yabu. But he's not sure of it yet. You've got the right idea.
Yeah, pretty much. ^_^, Yabu will get that into his head later. And I don't actually think Yabu thinks that he's replacing Shoon with Takaki but it might seem that way to Takaki. I'm building it up like that. I don't normally write things unless I can work with themes. So that's why I finally started working with fanfiction again, when someone finally gave me a theme that I could work with. I'm actually not sure how to write Yabu's perspective so that might take a while...I've been building up Takaki's char a lot so it'll be hard working in reverse. But I might start doing that once I get to when Takaki gets cast in Gokusen. So stay tuned, =D.
I think everyone wants to pinch Yabu's cheeks...especially when he was younger. SO CUTE. And I'm glad it worked...I pay the most attention to Yabu but I watch the others too, ^_^.
^_^, he's Yabu. And I want to write him as someone who can be totally different than what you think, but only when you really take a look behind who he is in public. So the cute affections thing is kind of a part of that. That and Yabu's trying really hard to be the rock that each member of Hey!Say!JUMP needs right now, the one who they can come to. So it's also part of that. My characterization of Yabu is really about him almost needing to be needed. So when I switch to his POV, it'll probably work with that. So I think if that's the explanation in mind, then that's Yabu being Yabu. If that makes sense. And yeah....*weird thoughts*...Yabu would be such a pimp then.
Lolx, I think everyone is. I was half expecting someone to mention that last chapter. But i like that nickname, so yeah you influenced me, ^_^! Awww, Takabuness is an awesome word! *files it away for future usage* I haven't read all of the fics you guys put up but I'm sure you're awesome at it, don't put yourself down! ^_^, yeah, I THINK I've gotten that vibe from Ani by now...*scary thoughts of Ani writing Yabu as a prisoner in a torture chamber come to mind* AHHHH, YABUCHII, STAY AWAY FROM ANIIII!!!
*Has Ryo wave back* xD, yeah, sorry...I'm trying to write that chapter now...I'm close to finishing it but it's REALLY horrible. Probably a by product of trying to write it in this mood. Or that and I always hate my writing. *shrugs* One Litre of Tears is soooo sad. But Ryo's char is amazing and soooo sweet and it's really an incredibly inspiring drama. ^_^, those PVs are pretty much what got me into the debuted groups in Johnny's, especially weeeek. Before that, I was pretty content to keep to Question?, xD.
....yeah, wow. Nope. RyoKame would be...wowz. So nope. Not Massu. NO WAY, RYODA. That's semi-popular. And lolx, a lot of people would think KAT-TUN with NEWS, since those groups have performed a lot together before and there's a lot of ties between them. HA, don't die on me! You got it right on your last try! Yay!
I've had an LJ since January but I don't get much time to be on it normally. This week is odd because I actually have downtime...*FEELS SICK FROM THE HORROR*. But yeah, pathetic is my LJ middle name.
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(lolx, sorry, LJ cut me off...I think I'm beating you on the whole 'I write essays instead of comments' thing, xD)
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