"Chrysalis", chapter three: future. Tony/Ziva, AU after end of season 10.

Dec 18, 2013 20:41

summary: How it should have been.

word count: 27,000 in total, 9,700 for this chapter

chapter one: past. chapter two

comments & feedback: Very much appreciated.

three: future )

fiction: ncis - chrysalis

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laglad December 18 2013, 21:20:48 UTC
Thank you for this story Sammy! I lilke the fact that's Ziva's point of view and her decision to move forward with Tony. In season 10, Tony shows his true feelings for her maybe if Cote had resigned,in season 11 Ziva would realize her love for him. We will never know...
PS: I love your reference to Remington Steele, which was my first tv show addiction (I was 7)

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fredsmith518 December 18 2013, 21:23:26 UTC
enjoyed reading this whole piece very much, Ziva's pov but with so much description of Tony's mood that he wasn't missed out. Thank you for sharing your talent.

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aksannyi December 19 2013, 00:00:59 UTC
Love it, and just what I needed. I honestly can't wait to see what kind of crazy adventures they get themselves into.

I think you should pitch an actual show. Forget NCIS: NO. (Because ... NO. lol) This is something I'd actually watch.

Thank you, Sammy, for rekindling my love of these two ... even though I'm still saddened to realize that it's not real, and that reality is far more harsh. I'm not sure that's a wound that will ever fully heal.

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Re:akasannyi ext_1191884 December 24 2013, 03:03:57 UTC
feliz navidad y prospero año nuevo..me encanto esta escritura ..he visto una encuesta en link que señala sammy de Cote operacion...no encaja Bishop en la serie..me da muchas esperanzas de que vuelva Ziva

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feliz año nuevo ext_1191884 December 28 2013, 01:45:15 UTC

bellestarr09 December 19 2013, 00:33:01 UTC
Thank God, no thank Sammy! I'm coming to live in your reality. This is wonderful.

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thegreathb December 19 2013, 03:57:54 UTC
LOVED this little series of Tony and Ziva! I could really feel the tension between them and would love if some form of this had happened on the show! I found this randomly through either tumblr or twitter and would love to read more from you! Keep up the great work!

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