"Chrysalis", chapter three: future. Tony/Ziva, AU after end of season 10.

[littlesammy]

summary: How it should have been.

word count: 27,000 in total, 9,700 for this chapter

chapter one: past. chapter two

comments & feedback: Very much appreciated.

Comments

[ext_1171099]

Oh, this whole story makes me smile, especially the third chapter. Even though from Ziva's POV I can so see (and feel) Tony's happiness. I liked the idea of the detective agency - BTW, great name for it - the first time I heard you mention it and now I'm all in. Please, please do more stories from this world. It's fascinating and funny and sweet and lusty and I am sure will come to reveal a little more angst and maybe danger and intrigue. Oh yeah, I am totally into it.

Thank you Sammy for making the world of Tony and Ziva continue like this!

[ext_886242]

*applauds* I like. I like very muchly. :D Can't wait to see what (mis)adventures you've got cooked up for our three musketeers next...

[kytivafan]

I read chapters 2 and 3 on my phone a couple of days ago because I was too excited to wait to get home to my ipad or computer. Downside of that excitement is I don't like to comment using my phone.

Typically I like Tony's POV better because so few people are able to get inside Ziva's head. They can get her actions and reactions - but her thought processes seem to elude most writers - not so with you. I think one of the things I love best about this story is that it is told from her POV - what I love second best is that she is the one who pushes for the relationship - yes, Tony wants it - but Ziva is the one who "fights" for it.

I hope you do continue in the AU world as this is what my still tender shipper heart needed.

[ext_2065176]

oh.kytivafan ...I really like that comment you made...Tony wants the relationship - but Ziva is the one who fights for it....

You are so right!! I like that it turned out like that.

Sammy, I can not wait to read your wonderful continuing story.
Thank you so much for keeping my love for Tony and Ziva alive.

Too hell with NCIS....

[com2mezt]

Please continue to write this story, you are such a emotional writer I feel your words, I feel the love and desire they have for each other. Thank you for such a wonderful story line. I was done, and stuck with a fork when Ziva climbed into his lap because she really wanted this relationsip with Tony.

[minimindbender]

Love,love,love...especially her climbing into his lap---so beautifully done. Thank you.

Is it sad that after 6 months I'm still grieving for lack of a better word? And so pissed. I guess NCIS meant more to me than I thought...at the moment I can't even watch the reruns. Too sad.

Keep the stories coming! They are magic!