Re: The Prom Queen Track Record - Mark/Lexie, PG-13shiparkerNovember 2 2009, 20:41:56 UTC
OMG! First of all I can never be overly objective about your work because I am your fangirl. I love your dialogs, the situations you created for pretty much all Grey's characters as well how well you explored them.
And this is beyond cute, beyond awesome. I think I giggled hard when Mark admitted he was jealous. Plus, I guess something like this in a way it would be fitting with Lexie's moments of jealousy. I love how you kept the essence of those characters on this story. Jealousy can often be an unattractive feature when it's posessive, but you made it playfull. The banter is great, as well mentions of Alex.
The last phrase? WIN WIN WIN WIN. Seriously, you made a almost-sane-24-year-old squee! Just, can you make this happen? I guess we can sneak this piece of dialog on twitter and send to teh writers LOL. Joking, but your story (And you) is great. Keep writing on this drabble-a-thon, it's always exciting to read things from you.
Re: The Prom Queen Track Record - Mark/Lexie, PG-13littleone87November 2 2009, 20:44:17 UTC
I love jealous Mark so very very much and you wrote it so perfectly! The last line? AMAZING. Thank you so much for joining in and writing! I hope you write more soon! :)
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She can’t figure out if that’s a turn-on for him or not.
Lol, I can see him having kinky tendencies like that XD
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I'm so glad you liked it! Thanks for reading and reviewing!
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I really don’t think you want to make a list. You don’t have that kind of time
I love this. You have their characters drawn so perfectly here. I do like your stuff so much.
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I'm glad you liked this! Thanks for reading and reviewing!
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And this is beyond cute, beyond awesome. I think I giggled hard when Mark admitted he was jealous. Plus, I guess something like this in a way it would be fitting with Lexie's moments of jealousy. I love how you kept the essence of those characters on this story. Jealousy can often be an unattractive feature when it's posessive, but you made it playfull. The banter is great, as well mentions of Alex.
The last phrase? WIN WIN WIN WIN. Seriously, you made a almost-sane-24-year-old squee! Just, can you make this happen? I guess we can sneak this piece of dialog on twitter and send to teh writers LOL. Joking, but your story (And you) is great. Keep writing on this drabble-a-thon, it's always exciting to read things from you.
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Jealousy is cute when it's playful. I can't see it being anything but with Mark, honestly. But you are totally right.
I definitely will have more for this drabblethon, if school cooperates. Thanks so much! I'm glad you enjoyed this!
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Oh god I shivered. o_o
LOVED this. Just...loved it.
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I'm glad you enjoyed this! Thanks for reading and reviewing!
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