In the Dark [2]

[little_passions]

Title: In the Dark
Beta: muramatsu_aoi
Pairing: Yunho/Jaejoong
Rating: PG-13
Genre: Romance, Angst, Drama
Summary: In a world of secrecy and iniquity, love still blooms in the cover of the night.

Comments

[little_passions]

Spot for beta! :D

[muramatsu_aoi]

now that we go deeper into jae's past, we come to understand why he' s driven to make the choices he did., i love the whole undercurrent of finding your own self worth and loving who you are written in jae's story.

yoomin's bantering is <3 and as we discussed, the whole feeling of time passing and jae coming to terms with his feelings for yunho really comes together in this part.

“I don’t believe in love,” wow. bringing that wall down is going to be another task all together.

and possibly this is the line i find most telling out of all
The man spoke again, his tone teasing but his voice shaking, his face revealing the tumultuous wave of emotions that he was feeling too. --> im hoping there is going to be no douchebag yunho out to hurt jae. it'll be interesting how you handle the upcoming conflict..

again, thank you for giving me a chance to beta this..

[snow_meow]

I like the flashbacks.
I think it's an important part of the story as it shows Yunho's importance in Jaejoong's life.

I feel so sad for Jaejoong as he was thrown away by both his family and his boyfriend.
It's a good think fate gave him one shot of kindness by sending him Yunho.

After reading about Jaejoong's past, I can understand why he felt he was not worth of Yunho.
He didn't want to tarnish the one good thing in his life.

I don't know if Yunho was looking for Jaejoong or fate and destiny made that call.
I'm glad Jaejoong has him back in his life.

[junsu_dbsk]

yo.....i kind of knew that there's something behind jae's involvement with those guys.

it's kind of sweet and sad at the same time as jae broke up from yunho, but it is a needed break though.

the ending is that yunho?...for a while there i thought it was hyunsoo.

anyways, thanks for writing this :D

[rabanitchas]

Jaejoong's life is so sad! He used to date the biggest asshole on Earth!
And who is the man in the elevator? I hope it's Yunho and not his ex, or his pimp!

Anyway.... this fic is awesome! I hope you update it soon!

P.S.: Am I the only one who thinks that Junsu in a kitchen is an invitation for disaster? >.<'

[ultamatempa]

no wonder jae didn't feel worthy of yunho's affections. i hope that bastard of a 'boyfriend' gets killed in jail, he's truly despicable and his family is better off without him (not like he's been providing for them anyway with him being in jail). i do hope that yunho gives jae at least a chance to explain, it's all too easy to let the hurt and anger resurface and shut out what could be a better relationship.