혀의 거짓말, 마음의 진실 (Hyeo-ui gojitmal, maeum-ui jinshil) [1]

[little_passions]

Title: 혀의 거짓말, 마음의 진실
Beta: muramatsu_aoi
Pairing: Yunho/Jaejoong
Rating: NC-17
Genre: Romance, Drama, Historical
Summary: He could lie to his allies, and he could lie to his enemies, but there was one thing he could not lie to - his heart.

Comments

[little_passions]

Spot for the lovely unnies: Sara, Jacqui & Trishy~ ♥

[jaejoongah]

!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I love historical fics and even more so when they involve YunJae. ;O; I remember reading through this the first time and I was like RKWJAERKLJAEOIFJAO \;O;/ and reading through it again this time doubled the feeling from my first read. Don't let anyone tell you that you can't write, little bananne.

You balanced everything out very well from the plot to the characterization (which I liked the most). I'm very satisfied with how this fic ended and would not object if you wanted to write another YJ fic like this. 8D

I love you bananne! ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥

[ext_1265513]

Finally it's up!
You know my feels for historical fanfics. <333

Guhhh. I don't really have much to say because uknow, I think I've said everything I needed to in our plot buddy sessions on MSN. 8DDD

But reading this again gave me a nice sense of nostalgia, it's as good as I remembered reading through it before! You did a good job with portraying their feelings. :3

[little_passions]

Spot for lovely beta. :D

[muramatsu_aoi]

something about your historical fics make my eyes go ♥♥♥♥

Jae's a whole mess of contradictions and confusion and Yunho's too much in love.. haha.. i love that you ended this part when jae is all "oh god i'm in trouble now"..

ack

/sorry for the comment fail, guessing re-reading does that to you..

Anne hwaiting!

[little_passions]

Spot for the people I gave heart attacks to earlier. :))

[mint_whispers]

OKAY THAT WAS HORRIBLE AND I AM DEFINATELY ONE OF THOSE PEOPLE.

Oohhhh I love your historical verses, the language is so good and sophisticated.

Jesus jaejoong don't break his heart. Yunho is too lovely.

[riseofnoona]

i should ban you from my existence for making me face an early death with your bad joke T______T NOONA IS NOT HAPPEH! >[

BUT i liked this chapter very much, so please be kind enough to post the rest asap. OR NOONA WILL BE EVEN MORE NOT HAPPEH! >[

[riseofnoona]

and i'm so sure yunho is doing exactly the same thing than jaejoong to know what the rebels are planning~

[blinkable]

Yea so oh wow *_* indeed on your effort in detailing up to the outfits worn!
I am not sure whether to say poor Yunho who will probably gets his heart broken by Jaejung or poor Jaejung having to betrayed Yunho whom he will learn to love (?) T____T
hmm 3-parts but you already finished right? Just a matter of posting right? I hope you will not keep us wait too long lol
Oh I'm wondering if there's typo ^^;
All though he’d hardly ever shown interest for women, the idea of lying with another man had never entered his MIND
And great title original in English as well as Korean translated version ♥

[bellecassies]

SPOT!!! :DD

[bellecassies]

wowww!! such a good start n i bet the whole story gonna be awesome!! :) yep, jae should be guilty for what he had done to yunho while yunho loves him with all his heart. update update update!! XDDD