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Self Loathing, Self Love

Jul 02, 2006 17:28

Title: Self Loathing, Self Love
Author: yuxonomei
Pairing: Nine/Ten
Rating: NC_17
Warnings: BDSM, M/m, caning. Spoilers for The Girl in the Fireplace.

( Self Loathing, Self Love. )

Comments 4

pheonix_iz_me July 3 2006, 00:24:10 UTC

WOW!

you should Cross-post this to timeslipping I'm sure vandonovan will love it.

transcendancing July 4 2006, 10:44:24 UTC

this is just breathtaking and incredible.

thank you so much...

shadowesque13 July 5 2006, 07:37:20 UTC

...Er. Sorry. I just have to say a few things here.
First of all, let's start off on a good note. I love the idea. I like the thought of Ten going back and beating some sense into Nine/punishing him(self) for things done in the past, etc. And, it's Nine/Ten. And Nine/Ten doesn't get enough love (hell, general Doctor/Doctor) in this fandom.

...That's about where my liking stops.
First of all, I just want to point out that this doesn't even count as a Kinkathon fic merely for the fact that there's no sex. That was sort of the, um, only rule. Kinky sex. Mostly it's just about Nine getting a hardon for his future self. There isn't even coming.

Next, grammar. For the love of Ra. I'm gonna take a wild stab at this and say you wrote it about 15 minutes before the deadline, because...yeah. If you don't like fics being beta'd (Ra knows none of mine have ever seen a beta), you could've at least gone through this fic and fixed it up more gramatically.

...I'm really just lost as to the point of some of this stuff. What was the ( ... )

yuxonomei July 6 2006, 22:56:09 UTC

First of all, I just want to point out that this doesn't even count as a Kinkathon fic merely for the fact that there's no sex. That was sort of the, um, only rule. Kinky sex. Mostly it's just about Nine getting a hardon for his future self. There isn't even coming.

First off, sex doesn't need to be about fucking, especially in BDSM and/or D/s. I know I don't need to have s3xX0r5 or to come to feel satisified during a good session and neither does my boi.

Next, grammar. For the love of Ra. I'm gonna take a wild stab at this and say you wrote it about 15 minutes before the deadline, because...yeah. If you don't like fics being beta'd (Ra knows none of mine have ever seen a beta), you could've at least gone through this fic and fixed it up more gramatically.

i take your points on grammar. I didn't have a fic beta because I don't really know anyone in Fandom. However, the people (not fandom) who had beta'd obviously didn't do a good job. only now do I notice commas that shouldn't be there.

How the hell does someone stand up and give ( ... )