Reset - Chapter Three

[lithic_rune]

Title: Reset
Fandom: Jak and Daxter
Rating: PG13
Summary: Sometimes all it takes is an off-course machine to change the course of time. Jak never made it to the future of his birth. Instead Damas came to the past.
Spoilers: Jak 1, Jak 2, and Jak 3

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[truthliesmagic]

First of all, can I just say how insanely envious I am of your ability to crank out such awesome chapters this quickly? Seriously. I wish I could write this good this fast.

Secondly, I laughed like a dork when it turned out that Damas's introduction to the people of the past was Boggy Billy. That. That was just brilliant. I can't wait until he meets Jak and Daxter

[lithic_rune]

I probably won't always be that speedy with chapters. (Case in point, no chapter this week, most likely.) But I like to try to stay on a roll when I can, so that I don't have a chance to lose interest or get distracted by some other idea before I reach the end.

I'm really glad to hear that I'm doing the characters justice. They have such unique personalities and quirks, and so little on-screen time.

Blue Sage. Fffft. That guy abuses the thesaurus! I had to use one myself, which I don't usually have to do, because I have a good vocabulary, but I needed to this time so that I could abuse it. orz (And I still feel like I might not have abused it enough - seriously, listen to the guy when he talks in the game! But I couldn't bring myself to go to that level~)