Reset - Chapter Three

[lithic_rune]

Title: Reset
Fandom: Jak and Daxter
Rating: PG13
Summary: Sometimes all it takes is an off-course machine to change the course of time. Jak never made it to the future of his birth. Instead Damas came to the past.
Spoilers: Jak 1, Jak 2, and Jak 3

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[truthliesmagic]

First of all, can I just say how insanely envious I am of your ability to crank out such awesome chapters this quickly? Seriously. I wish I could write this good this fast.

Secondly, I laughed like a dork when it turned out that Damas's introduction to the people of the past was Boggy Billy. That. That was just brilliant. I can't wait until he meets Jak and Daxter.

On that note, poor Daxter! I hope he's okay. Also it was really interesting to read your description of Samos's hut and how he uses Green Eco. You used everything that was there in the game but went more in-depth with the whys and wherefores of why the stuff was there in the first place, and how it's used. Details like that are what make good stories great.

The appearance of the Blue Sage makes me a very happy fangirl, him being my favourite Sage. You have his characterization down brilliantly, especially given how little is seen of him in-game. I love the idea of the forcefield, and how it's explained using eco.

And is that a Metal Head closing in at the end? Gah, you and your cliffhangers making me impatient!

[lithic_rune]

I probably won't always be that speedy with chapters. (Case in point, no chapter this week, most likely.) But I like to try to stay on a roll when I can, so that I don't have a chance to lose interest or get distracted by some other idea before I reach the end.

I'm really glad to hear that I'm doing the characters justice. They have such unique personalities and quirks, and so little on-screen time.

Blue Sage. Fffft. That guy abuses the thesaurus! I had to use one myself, which I don't usually have to do, because I have a good vocabulary, but I needed to this time so that I could abuse it. orz (And I still feel like I might not have abused it enough - seriously, listen to the guy when he talks in the game! But I couldn't bring myself to go to that level~)