Domilie/Embilly fic: "For Better or Worse" (PG-13)

[literarylemming]

TITLE: For Better or Worse
AUTHOR: Mnemosyne

Disclaimer: The events of this story are fictitious. Nothing that takes place in this story has ever happened, and I'm not implying anything will happen. This is a work of fiction, and no harm is intended towards the individuals portrayed herein.
SUMMARY: On the eve of Dom and Emilie's wedding, Billy

Comments

[bailunrui]

Why don't you just rip my heart out next time? It would be less painful. Geez! (Lovely!)

[literarylemming]

Well, if you insist...

;) Kidding!

Thoughts Part 1

[shorttracked]

Judging by the fact that he'd barely left her side for the past month, she was fairly well-assured that he'd be there with bells on; and possibly nothing else, because that was the kind of thing her Dominic would do.

Kinky. I like that.

"Es leather, Emilie. Cows get wet all the time."

Very good point for Billy to make. Though, I don't want him dying of pnemonia any time soon.

Billy sighed, running a hand through his wet, spiky hair. "Don't play coy with me, Emilie," he said, before fixing her with a dark stare. "That only works in bed."

Now is a good time for a heart attack. Oh my!

"What do you want me to say, Bill?" she repeated, turning away from the window and leaning against the wall, arms crossed protectively over her stomach. "You want me to say I wanted to get married in Scotland so I could guarantee you'd be there? I thought about it. Was it the deciding factor? No, but it was there."
Oh! The Theorist started going off here. Arms protectively over the stomach makes me think there might be a litle foreshadiowing there

Thoughts Part 2

[shorttracked]

"Come on, Bill," Dom said eagerly, straightening up and reaching out a hand to his friend. "I can't keep her all to myself; 'snot natural. Not healthy, being so totally happy. Dance with her. Dance with my wife."

Dom is just asking to have his wife stolen from him. He really is lucky to have such a lovely friend in Billy.

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I completely adore this and hope to god to see more of it. I'm just so in love with this story now.

Re: Thoughts Part 2

[literarylemming]

Awwwww, thank you for such a long, detailed piece of feedback! I'm so glad you enjoyed it so much! As it stands right now, I don't see there being a sequel; I quite liked how it ended, on that bittersweet, melancholy note. But you can never say never! :-D

Thank you again!

[caffrey]

I agree with bailunrui, M.

YOU RIPPED MY BLOODY HEART OUT WITH THAT.

*sobs*

[literarylemming]

*ENORMOUS HUGS!* It's been so long since I've written angst -- I suppose it all came to a head and boiled over. *more hugs!* I hope you liked it! :-D

[caffrey]

Oh I did, m'dear. I loved it. Saved it to memories, even.

*cries again*

[literarylemming]

There there, think happy thoughts. Like Orli's cheekbones! Those should make you happy, yes? :-D They're such lovely cheekbones, after all. *coo*

[starstruck__x]

That was amazingly beautiful and yet heart wrenchingly sad. That last paragraph was my absolute favorite.

The thought of Emilie and Dom getting married though is perfectly adorable. *squees*

It's just so good.

[literarylemming]

They'd be so beautiful on their wedding day, don't you think? *happy sighing/cuddling them*

I'm so happy to hear you liked it!

[trick_julie]

*red eyed* Oh, my God! I