"After Hours" post-ep fic.

May 17, 2011 01:32

Title: Bearing Strain
Author: lit_luminary
Rating: PG-13
Characters/Pairings: Wilson; House/Wilson friendship.
Summary: Cuddy calls Wilson at five in the morning: the conversation we didn't hear.

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post-ep, ficlet, character pov: wilson, cuddy, wilson, house

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bmax67 May 17 2011, 12:21:07 UTC
Great fill-in for the scenes I wish we could see but never get the chance.

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lit_luminary May 18 2011, 01:02:41 UTC
Thank you! I wish the writers would get over this habit of having Wilson vanish/be conveniently indisposed when House is in crisis, but as it is, well, fic writers will have plenty to play with while waiting for the finale.

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cuddyclothes May 17 2011, 13:11:04 UTC
Wonderful fic! Thank you so much!

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lit_luminary May 18 2011, 01:03:03 UTC
Thank you for commenting! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

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nightdog_barks May 17 2011, 16:49:13 UTC
Ah, I really liked this. Lovely touches throughout, and a great last line.

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lit_luminary May 18 2011, 01:06:02 UTC
Thank you. I'm detail-oriented by nature, so it's always nice to have readers appreciate the little things.

As for the last line, I thought that that would have to be what makes things different: that Wilson resolves to listen instead of gearing up to lecture; to communicate instead of cornering House with accusations.

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smiddlecn May 17 2011, 21:31:58 UTC
I like this. It's a shame we didn't get a scene like this last night. Oh, and I think it's a nice, Wilson-ish touch that you had him remember to feed the cat before he left. It's the sort of thing Wilson would do on auto-pilot while thinking 101 other things.

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lit_luminary May 18 2011, 01:08:10 UTC
Thank you! I also felt the lack of something like this, which is why I had to write it.

Remembering to feed the cat went in relatively late in the writing process: it was rather my remembering that Wilson, knowing House was stable, would remember to feed Sarah on the way out.

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topaz_eyes May 18 2011, 01:28:27 UTC
So wonderful--I could hear Cuddy's weariness and Wilson's fear and anger were palpable.

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lit_luminary May 18 2011, 01:32:00 UTC
Thank you! I write by hearing their voices, so it's always nice when a reader picks up the same sound (so to speak).

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