The Cost of Butterfly Kisses

[lit_gal]

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[spazlady2002]

*wipes face* oh man you made me cry!!!

[lit_gal]

Thank you so much. I just couldn't see Xander letting his daughter stay in town after that.

[spazlady2002]

yeah I cant see that either. And I'm all sorts of scared now, cos we all know Spike is gonna do something crazy.

[dharma_slut]

Buffy is right. Xander is so incredibly strong. Also, one of the most complex characters you've ever written-- in a work that is truly full of complex characters!

And I really love the way you've treated Buffy in this story.

[lit_gal]

Xander always was strong, just as strong as Buffy. And I'm so very glad that you're enjoying the characterization of all of them.

[laurakyna]

oh. This one's so sad- you're making me cry! Awesome chap though... more?!!! XD

[lit_gal]

I really wanted to show Xander as a good father, and I think he really is one here.

[laurakyna]

Oh, he is- you definitely got it right! I hope they all make it though

[chaoskir]

Whoa!! And now I'm hanging from this great cliff!
Whoa again! That was so much emotionally.
Great stuff! Wonderful chapter! And it must be so hard to be such a great DAD as Xander is. I guess it was the right decision, and such a hard one!
I really do need to read more!

[lit_gal]

I'm so sorry, but I do have the next bit up so that you don't have too much hanging to do. And I'm so glad Xander is coming off as such a good Dad here.

The Cost Of Butterfly Kisses 41

[slashpuppy]

*is crying*

Make it better? Pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee! :-)

Re: The Cost Of Butterfly Kisses 41

[lit_gal]

Awwwww. I'm so sorry, but the next bit is up now, does that make it better?