Shadows and Siege 8

[lit_gal]

Shadows and Siege Part 8
Sequel to Shadows of the Past
Fandoms: Primary: Sentinel.  Secondary: La Femme Nikita, Stargate SG-1
Slash, Rated: ADULT

Shadows and Siege part one
Shadows and Siege part two
Shadows and Siege part three
Shadows and Siege part four

Shadows and Siege part five
Shadows and Siege part six
Shadows and Siege part seven

"This is… this is so

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Shadows And Siege 8

[slashpuppy]

You were right. Nobody is as happy as I am about SG-1 meeting Blair and Jim. *does happy dance*

Come on, *Blair* going toe to toe with Jack over Jack's reaction to/dismissal of Jim and his talents? If there's anyone Blair would fight for, it's Jim. I love it! :-)

God this story is captivating. As soon as I finish the newest bit I still want *more*! Eagerly looking forward to the next chapter.

Wee fixes:
- For a half-second, Jim thought [For a half second Jim thought]
- Jim found it frightening simple [frighteningly]
- Our taxdollars are actually [tax dollars]
- Pigpen in the comics strip [comic]? comics just sounds wrong

I'm not sure what this bit is trying to say. I'm not sure who all the 'he's might be referring to.
Jim hadn't been joking when he suggested that Blair might do a table leg because as horny as he was all the time, he might have in the absence of a better partner.

- what he wanted in the short time [short term]
- and it still wasn't that simple [still] Reading this out loud I found I was putting this

Re: Shadows And Siege 8

[lit_gal]

Blair is totally going to fight for Jim... that's what he does. And Jack can come off as rather dismissive/disrespectful, especially if you don't know him. Blair would be totally cool with Jack disrespecting him, and might even expect it because Blair isn't one of the chest-pounding alpha males. However, Jack going after Jim is so not okay with him.

And wow. Okay, I"m officially embarrassed. That's bad. I can't believe the number of mistakes I made. *cringes*

Re: Shadows And Siege 8

[slashpuppy]

*thwaps you* Stop cringing!

You delivered a taut, nicely balanced chapter with standing-up-for-his-buddy!Blair, with dismissive!Jack, and great dialogue and I'm reasonably certain that Blair made Teal'c scream with laughter. I mean, we *all* saw that eyebrow twitch! And Danny kept having to choke down laughter at something Blair said. And Jack did at least once too.

AND, I got to nitpick! *is happy* :-)

Re: Shadows And Siege 8

[lit_gal]

Do you think I could convince people that I put those things in there on purpose just to give you a chance to nitpick to your heart's content??

And I'm very glad that you're enjoying the interactions.

Hooray!

[tootallforyou]

Another section up. Awesome.

Favorite Parts: I love the angst of Blair trying not to distract Jim by keeping his lust in check but that making Jim think Blair is not only not interested but scared of bonding. Definite tension building.

2. You're an idiot. An idiot with issues. - Greatness!

3. "How am I supposed to know if I'm interpreting the sounds right?" Jim asked. "Yeah. We should do that under test conditions, but I so need to remember that one." - So totally Blair.

I'm really enjoying this. Thanks for sharing. Keep it coming.

Re: Hooray!

[lit_gal]

Jim and Blair had one moment of being on the same sexual page, but that moment passed, and now they are definitely on different pages. And I'm glad that you're finding Blair very Blairy here. I do have fun writing him.

[lit_gal]

I adore Sentinelfic, so if I can help spread the love, it's all good. And I really am chuffed that I could get you interested in the characters without you having a big background in them!

[garettgal]

Enjoying this immensely and looking forward to the next chapter.

[lit_gal]

Thanks so much for letting me know!

[ladysybylgrey]

This. Is. Awesome.

I am really looking forward to the insecurity conversation. Cause I's laughing lots over the interaction tween these two.

G

[lit_gal]

Thank you so much! They really are fun to let loose on each other!