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liritarofrohan

Fic: Stolen Memories

Aug 16, 2007 00:56

Title: Stolen Memories
Pairing: Matt/Haitian
Rating: NC-17
Summary: The head of Homeland Security isn’t as alone as he thought.
Prompt: slashyheroes15 04. Dream

( Matthew. The voice flowed into my mind, twining around my thoughts like silk: unfamiliar, deep, and resonant, with more than a hint of an accent. )

slash, slashyheroes15, heroes, fic

Comments 29

veetvoojagig August 16 2007, 09:31:15 UTC

DUUUUUUDE.

That was incredible. Seriously! Ending! Smut! All excellent.

And now I'm late for work.

liritarofrohan August 16 2007, 11:35:59 UTC

Yeah, I thought of the idea in the car on the way home from work, and then that last line popped into my head, and I couldn't go to sleep before I'd written it.

... Though the bottle of Vault I drank during the last hour of work helped that problem, too.

veetvoojagig August 16 2007, 18:57:28 UTC

*laughs* I love you.

liritarofrohan August 16 2007, 23:24:16 UTC

*Hugs*

g_shadowslayer August 16 2007, 20:21:56 UTC

Whoa... This was hot, and you DID go where I thought you might be going! I don't know if I should be a little creeped out or not, because I loved this :)

liritarofrohan August 16 2007, 23:27:09 UTC

*Grins* Thanks. Being creeped out is fine; the Haitian has that effect on people. In a different way from Thompson, of course, but he was influenced by him from a young age.

...

...

No. No. Evil, evil bunnies!

g_shadowslayer August 17 2007, 02:47:32 UTC

Y'know, I was trying so hard not to go there...

*shoots plot bunny ded*

liritarofrohan August 17 2007, 03:49:02 UTC

*Whimpers* Make it stop?

Thread 8

entangled_now August 17 2007, 16:50:04 UTC

How many times had we done this?

Oh I love this idea so very much! The way they can talk to each other. The way it's random and Matt reacts to it. And afterwards I'm left wondering if the Haitian wants to, or has to...

liritarofrohan August 17 2007, 17:59:05 UTC

I'm so tempted to write a sequel to from the Haitian's POV to discover his motives...

entangled_now August 17 2007, 19:21:58 UTC

I really hope that you do. Haitian pov on Matt and the whole scene would be all sorts of excellent!

liritarofrohan August 17 2007, 20:13:37 UTC

Uh huh. I probably will. Because the Haitian is a deep bastard and would be all kinds of amazing to write.

Thread 6

greatwhitesnark August 17 2007, 22:34:26 UTC

Oh wow. I loved the way you wrote this, the level of detail and the word choice you used all really helped create a nice mood. Plus, that ending? Wow. Nice and dark and twisted. Just the way I like my slash.

And hey, Matt got to be on top this time! Shame he won't remember it.

liritarofrohan August 18 2007, 04:07:46 UTC

I know, isn't it? *Laughs* Though I really think I'm going to do a sequel to this, from the Haitian's POV. Because I didn't go into HIS motives in this, and... well... it would be fun. *Grins*

greatwhitesnark August 18 2007, 04:38:16 UTC

That would be very fun indeed. I'd love to read it.

I am also jealous of your fic writing abilities. You've got four of your prompts filled while I'm still stuck on my first.

liritarofrohan August 18 2007, 13:57:14 UTC

Believe me, this is a first for me. It usually takes me a month to write anything. I tend to get bogged down in complications. *Laughs*

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liritarofrohan August 22 2007, 13:15:35 UTC

Thanks so much. Glad you liked it. *Grins*