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Jan 31, 2007 18:17

Disclaimer: None of these characters are mine.
Written for: The "Candy is Dandy" Challenge
Prompt Received: Bellatrix Lestrange and Jelly Slugs
A/N: Wow, was this ever a hard challenge for someone who likes amphibians and the Longbottom family! *whines* But here it is.

Bella wouldn't admit it under torture, but she's afraid of anything slimy. )

candychallenge, ficlet

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a_bees_buzz January 31 2007, 23:31:47 UTC
You almost made me feel sorry for Bella there! Ok, not quite. Just, you know, slugs are soooo yucky.

A fitting end, indeed, for Mrs. Lestrange.

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lionille January 31 2007, 23:37:36 UTC
lol... thanks! :D I was just reading and commenting on your entry. Fun challenge.

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a_bees_buzz January 31 2007, 23:48:29 UTC
Isn't it? I'm thinking of doing another round.

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lionille January 31 2007, 23:54:00 UTC
You're brave! I thought about it, but chickened out. Too afraid of cockroach clusters, lol.

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purplefluffycat February 1 2007, 00:28:57 UTC
This is wonderful and so imaginative, and I just want to make sure I have understood it correctly - Bella has been transfigured into a jelly slug, and she's just about to be eaten by Trevor???!!!

Fab ficlet!

PurpleFluffyCat x

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lionille February 1 2007, 00:52:58 UTC
LOL! :D I was just thinking she was having a nightmare, but your way would have been so much better! That's too funny!

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mnemosyne_1 February 1 2007, 04:09:47 UTC
Ha! This is hilarious! I love the background with Frank and his toad too... :D

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lionille February 1 2007, 15:11:51 UTC
Thank you! I don't like the villain characters, but it was kinda fun putting in a tiny hint of Bella/Frank.

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sapphiretragedy February 1 2007, 05:00:19 UTC
This was awesome. You almost made me pity Bellatrix. Almost. She deserves what she gets!

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lionille February 1 2007, 15:12:36 UTC
Thank you! :)

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ireneadler February 1 2007, 11:28:31 UTC
Wow. This is just....incredible. You humanize Bella with her fear of creepy crawlies, but at the same time show what a monster she is and always has been--torturing a couple because one of them once owned a toad? This story is beautifully written, but it quite literally sent chills down my spine. *shudders*

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lionille February 1 2007, 15:15:47 UTC
Thank you! ^^ I didn't know what I was going to do with a Bella prompt, lol.

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