Comments | limone1: New Fic: Hairline Fractures

limone1

New Fic: Hairline Fractures

Jan 06, 2009 16:30

Title: Hairline Fractures

( Chapter 1 )

Comments 14

cleaninggirl March 17 2009, 15:52:02 UTC

Oooh now I am intreged looking forward to the next chapter it looks like this story is going to be a real doozy knock down, drag out fight with some making up to be had *lol* great story seriosly looking forward to your next chapter

limone1 March 18 2009, 19:01:54 UTC

You'll see... Will post more chapters soonish.
Glad you like it so far :)

pink_flame_87 March 18 2009, 00:01:18 UTC

I really like it. I especially like,"And you don't believe so don't use my faith when your science won't help you." Really great line.

limone1 March 18 2009, 19:03:40 UTC

Happy to hear you like it :)
They really don't agree on some basic things - makes it interesting.

inspirera March 18 2009, 10:15:29 UTC

I love this... can't wait to see where it goes :)

limone1 March 18 2009, 19:04:13 UTC

Thank you :)
More will follow soon.

dreamincolor March 24 2009, 02:10:44 UTC

Very interesting - you really captured the sadness of the whole Zach scenario very poignantly. Can't wait to see where you go with this.

limone1 March 24 2009, 20:19:21 UTC

Happy you like my choice of subject. Zack kind of just disappeared on the show. What he did really didn't seem to affect them in the long term.

nickeldreams March 25 2009, 15:48:18 UTC

I'm a little late reading this, but I really enjoyed it. Can't wait to see where it goes, which I can do now. :)

limone1 March 25 2009, 18:59:36 UTC

Glad you enjoyed it :)

Good to know I'm not the only one being late reading things!