Hazard Pay, Part 11

[lilymoon1]

Hazard Pay
Part 11
Fandom: Final Fantasy VII, Advent Children
Pairing: Reno x Cloud
Rating: NC-17 overall
Spoilers: references to events in the movie
Warnings: yaoi
Disclaimer: Owned by SquareEnix, not me
A/N: unbetaed so I could post it before going to work.

Comments

[xchristabelx]

Aaaw. This chapter was awesome. Reno worrying about Cloud is just plain cute. Also loved the subtle Vincent/Rude. Keep going. :)

[lilymoon1]

Thanks! Poor Reno. He doesn't know whether to be mad or not. Emotions do weird things to your logic.

[sildil]

Excellent, loved the Rude/Vince stuff, and Reno worrying about Cloud was just precious! x

[lilymoon1]

Thanks. I just hope I haven't ventured too far into fluffdom.

[stratospherique]

Awww poor Reno, having to deal with these emotions. Cloud had better get well soon, so they can talk and then have more sexcapades.

[lilymoon1]

Well Hey! Haven't seen you about as much. Nice to see you back in my LJ. Yeah, poor Reno. Emotions messing him all up.

[mirien]

I was so looking forward to this chapter and it didn't disappoint! Reno struggling to deal with *gasp* emotions was wonderful, now I'm itching for Cloud to wake up!

Am also really enjoying the RudexVincent side story. Reno almost making the connection and then getting distracted by his worry was perfect. Can't wait to see what Vincent manages to find on his hunt.

Loving this, you have such a readable style and your characterizations just ring so true.

[lilymoon1]

Thank you! That's one of the most flattering comments I've received. I hope you continue to enjoy the story as it unfolds.

[anonymous]

I agree. It was so sweet. Reno has a soft side to him. *^_^* I love reading this series. You have an amazing way of writing things.

[elliekins13]

Ahh! Sorry that was me. I forgot I wasn't logged in. *Slaps self*

[lilymoon1]

Thanks! Yep, I think Reno has a soft and caring side to him as well as the ruthless Turk side.