Okay like I know you are writing senpai and I say that I love your writing so many times that you’re probably sick of hearing it. And I never thought that your writing can get any better because it was already so good BUT THIS IS JUST A WHOLE NEW LEVEL THIS IS A MASTERPIECE, THE BEST YOU HAVE WRITTEN.
Lol why am I even surprised, you’re writing senpai, of course you’re going to improve from excellence to brilliant to idkwhatotherwordstouse.
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I don’t even know to describe why I love this piece so much but the way you phrase your words, the way you link different ideas together into one sentence just makes the lit-nerd in me scream because they’re so engaging and refreshing to read. Other than two sentences you posted on Twitter (I like them a lot too), this is my absolute favorite sentence: ”In the end, what else did he ever learn by heart, except for his own lyrics and Seunghoon’s body.”. AND THIS FUCKING PART: “he found himself hollowed like an abandoned house with all four windows opened
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WTF LJ SAID I EXCEEDED THE LIMIT FOR CHARACTERS IN THE COMMENT. WHY WOULD U NEED A LIMIT FOR THAT.
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Your mind never really forget what your body has been through. Now that the missing sensations of warmth that used to linger on Mino’s body constantly reminds him of how lonely and scared he was before Seunghoon, he finds himself everyday thinking less about forgiveness and more about desire. … Mino wanted to be accepted - to be loved, and it comes at the price of not being able to love the one he chooses.” Totally speechless at how beautiful and poetic this whole paragraph is. I’m still amazed at how you bring different ideas together and wind them together so tightly that they actually manage to BREAK MY HEART
Seunghoon would destroy his computer when he reads his sentence I actually laughed omg I actually laughed so much at this. I LAUGHED THROUGH MY TEARS.
But do you see, loving you put me through hell and back and I took it, I rightfully push the gas pedal to race straight to the deep, dark pits that I knew was
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Okay CLEO IS BACK AND SHE SLAYS MY COMMENT SO HARD LIKE MY FIC IS 8 pages and her comment is 3 pages im ready to die
Thank so you much for liking this fic so much 😳😳😳 I like hate the fact that I rushed through the second part of the fic and at first this fic was gon be Iono a smut or something but I couldn't bring myself to do it so it was stuck for a long time because u didn't know how to proceed with the story. I could have made it longer into a series but I already have Inner Circle that I haven't even updated in 3 months im trash.
Structurally speaking, the post break up part should be longer and including more details of what their lives were before, and the letter should be a letter n not an email because I can't even 😂😂😂 and like he sends an email and 10 mins later here hoon is??? Totally convenient ha like they still live next door who tf do this. I like have so many thing I dislike bout this fic but thank you for making me feel like maybe it's not that bad!
This is so deep... I am left speechless. Thank you! It's a really good story! I will read Mino's letter again cause it got right into my heart and it left me thinking about many things...
Thank you for reading and leaving comment! I was feeling like this fic was a little too rush and that I could have structured it better, but thank you for liking it!
ah this is my first minhoon fic (i just started reading fics now...) and i LOVE every single bits of it! it was so deep, so beautifully written and it gets me thinking for real.... i couldn't stop thinking about it for 3 days i guess?
thank you for writing thiss!! now i'm off to read your other fics heheeheh
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if this is going to be a sad ending, i swear i will puke on everything u love!!!
kidding, i will read this later when i'm not so busy sobs maybe during my lunch break
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Okay like I know you are writing senpai and I say that I love your writing so many times that you’re probably sick of hearing it. And I never thought that your writing can get any better because it was already so good BUT THIS IS JUST A WHOLE NEW LEVEL THIS IS A MASTERPIECE, THE BEST YOU HAVE WRITTEN.
Lol why am I even surprised, you’re writing senpai, of course you’re going to improve from excellence to brilliant to idkwhatotherwordstouse.
ANYWAY
I don’t even know to describe why I love this piece so much but the way you phrase your words, the way you link different ideas together into one sentence just makes the lit-nerd in me scream because they’re so engaging and refreshing to read. Other than two sentences you posted on Twitter (I like them a lot too), this is my absolute favorite sentence: ”In the end, what else did he ever learn by heart, except for his own lyrics and Seunghoon’s body.”. AND THIS FUCKING PART: “he found himself hollowed like an abandoned house with all four windows opened ( ... )
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ANYWAY.
Your mind never really forget what your body has been through. Now that the missing sensations of warmth that used to linger on Mino’s body constantly reminds him of how lonely and scared he was before Seunghoon, he finds himself everyday thinking less about forgiveness and more about desire. … Mino wanted to be accepted - to be loved, and it comes at the price of not being able to love the one he chooses.”
Totally speechless at how beautiful and poetic this whole paragraph is. I’m still amazed at how you bring different ideas together and wind them together so tightly that they actually manage to BREAK MY HEART
Seunghoon would destroy his computer when he reads his sentence
I actually laughed omg I actually laughed so much at this. I LAUGHED THROUGH MY TEARS.
But do you see, loving you put me through hell and back and I took it, I rightfully push the gas pedal to race straight to the deep, dark pits that I knew was ( ... )
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Thank so you much for liking this fic so much 😳😳😳 I like hate the fact that I rushed through the second part of the fic and at first this fic was gon be Iono a smut or something but I couldn't bring myself to do it so it was stuck for a long time because u didn't know how to proceed with the story. I could have made it longer into a series but I already have Inner Circle that I haven't even updated in 3 months im trash.
Structurally speaking, the post break up part should be longer and including more details of what their lives were before, and the letter should be a letter n not an email because I can't even 😂😂😂 and like he sends an email and 10 mins later here hoon is??? Totally convenient ha like they still live next door who tf do this. I like have so many thing I dislike bout this fic but thank you for making me feel like maybe it's not that bad!
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thank you for writing thiss!! now i'm off to read your other fics heheeheh
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