WTF LJ SAID I EXCEEDED THE LIMIT FOR CHARACTERS IN THE COMMENT. WHY WOULD U NEED A LIMIT FOR THAT.
ANYWAY.
Your mind never really forget what your body has been through. Now that the missing sensations of warmth that used to linger on Mino’s body constantly reminds him of how lonely and scared he was before Seunghoon, he finds himself everyday thinking less about forgiveness and more about desire. … Mino wanted to be accepted - to be loved, and it comes at the price of not being able to love the one he chooses.” Totally speechless at how beautiful and poetic this whole paragraph is. I’m still amazed at how you bring different ideas together and wind them together so tightly that they actually manage to BREAK MY HEART
Seunghoon would destroy his computer when he reads his sentence I actually laughed omg I actually laughed so much at this. I LAUGHED THROUGH MY TEARS.
But do you see, loving you put me through hell and back and I took it, I rightfully push the gas pedal to race straight to the deep, dark pits that I knew was awaiting for me at the end of the road. Loving you hurts, and I took every chances I could, just to get used to the pain. THE WHOLE METAPHOR OF ACCELERATING INTO PAIN AND HURT, I’M JUST SAYING BYE TO MY HEART like it’s okay, it’s not like I need a heart anyway.
Hyung, you left me. You never gave me a choice. I was grateful for it. How much would I hate you if you told me to give up a big part, a central part of myself just to be with you. But then wouldn’t it be easier, I would just hate you instead and I might not have to think about everything that I’m thinking right now. You would just become another selfish human being that He told me to forgive. This took me some time to understand but when I did, I was blown away because I’ve never thought of things like that. Although I’m pretty sure this might not be what Seunghoon intended to do, this might be Mino trying to justify Seunghoon leaving him IDK.
Mino was made from skin and flesh and bones and a thousand questions that were never answered. /falls in love with the beauty of this sentence
when he hears three gentle knocks on the door… He cannot hide his smile when a familiar face appears so close to his behind the opened door. IS THIS WHAT I THINK IT IS
“Who are you and what are you up to?” Mino slowly mumbles as he fights back the waves of emotions coming from the butterflies in his stomach.
“Name is Lee Seunghoon, and I’m here to show this fucker how to love himself.”
Mino let himself be slowly pushed into the room by Seunghoon, as the door quickly closes behind them. FUCK MY WHOLE LIFE, IT IS. SHOUT OUT TO THE MOUNTAINS AND THE VALLEYS, LY WROTE A HAPPY ENDING.
OF COURSE YOU WILL BREAK MY HEART AND THEN MEND IT AGAIN SO THAT YOU CAN BREAK IT WITH THE NEXT FIC, OF COURSE. TT___________TT
I have to admit that I was a little uncomfortable with the religious thing even though I know it’s a huge theme of this fic but it actually wasn’t as uncomfortable as I expected :)
I think the reason why I hate my own fics when I read this is because I feel my fics are so pretentious but your way with words gets better every time and yet it’s really genuine and earnest in all of the heartbreaking beauty. I’m not even sure if “poetic” is the right word to describe your fics because “poetic” sounds so constructed but your fics are not!
THANKS ANYWAY FOR WRITING THIS, THANKS FOR THE “FORCE OF A THOUSAND HEARTBREAKS”.
P.S: This reached 3 pages on Word document What am I doing with my life
Okay CLEO IS BACK AND SHE SLAYS MY COMMENT SO HARD LIKE MY FIC IS 8 pages and her comment is 3 pages im ready to die
Thank so you much for liking this fic so much 😳😳😳 I like hate the fact that I rushed through the second part of the fic and at first this fic was gon be Iono a smut or something but I couldn't bring myself to do it so it was stuck for a long time because u didn't know how to proceed with the story. I could have made it longer into a series but I already have Inner Circle that I haven't even updated in 3 months im trash.
Structurally speaking, the post break up part should be longer and including more details of what their lives were before, and the letter should be a letter n not an email because I can't even 😂😂😂 and like he sends an email and 10 mins later here hoon is??? Totally convenient ha like they still live next door who tf do this. I like have so many thing I dislike bout this fic but thank you for making me feel like maybe it's not that bad!
ANYWAY.
Your mind never really forget what your body has been through. Now that the missing sensations of warmth that used to linger on Mino’s body constantly reminds him of how lonely and scared he was before Seunghoon, he finds himself everyday thinking less about forgiveness and more about desire. … Mino wanted to be accepted - to be loved, and it comes at the price of not being able to love the one he chooses.”
Totally speechless at how beautiful and poetic this whole paragraph is. I’m still amazed at how you bring different ideas together and wind them together so tightly that they actually manage to BREAK MY HEART
Seunghoon would destroy his computer when he reads his sentence
I actually laughed omg I actually laughed so much at this. I LAUGHED THROUGH MY TEARS.
But do you see, loving you put me through hell and back and I took it, I rightfully push the gas pedal to race straight to the deep, dark pits that I knew was awaiting for me at the end of the road. Loving you hurts, and I took every chances I could, just to get used to the pain.
THE WHOLE METAPHOR OF ACCELERATING INTO PAIN AND HURT, I’M JUST SAYING BYE TO MY HEART like it’s okay, it’s not like I need a heart anyway.
Hyung, you left me. You never gave me a choice. I was grateful for it. How much would I hate you if you told me to give up a big part, a central part of myself just to be with you. But then wouldn’t it be easier, I would just hate you instead and I might not have to think about everything that I’m thinking right now. You would just become another selfish human being that He told me to forgive.
This took me some time to understand but when I did, I was blown away because I’ve never thought of things like that. Although I’m pretty sure this might not be what Seunghoon intended to do, this might be Mino trying to justify Seunghoon leaving him IDK.
Mino was made from skin and flesh and bones and a thousand questions that were never answered.
/falls in love with the beauty of this sentence
when he hears three gentle knocks on the door… He cannot hide his smile when a familiar face appears so close to his behind the opened door.
IS THIS WHAT I THINK IT IS
“Who are you and what are you up to?” Mino slowly mumbles as he fights back the waves of emotions coming from the butterflies in his stomach.
“Name is Lee Seunghoon, and I’m here to show this fucker how to love himself.”
Mino let himself be slowly pushed into the room by Seunghoon, as the door quickly closes behind them.
FUCK MY WHOLE LIFE, IT IS.
SHOUT OUT TO THE MOUNTAINS AND THE VALLEYS, LY WROTE A HAPPY ENDING.
OF COURSE YOU WILL BREAK MY HEART AND THEN MEND IT AGAIN SO THAT YOU CAN BREAK IT WITH THE NEXT FIC, OF COURSE. TT___________TT
I have to admit that I was a little uncomfortable with the religious thing even though I know it’s a huge theme of this fic but it actually wasn’t as uncomfortable as I expected :)
I think the reason why I hate my own fics when I read this is because I feel my fics are so pretentious but your way with words gets better every time and yet it’s really genuine and earnest in all of the heartbreaking beauty. I’m not even sure if “poetic” is the right word to describe your fics because “poetic” sounds so constructed but your fics are not!
THANKS ANYWAY FOR WRITING THIS, THANKS FOR THE “FORCE OF A THOUSAND HEARTBREAKS”.
P.S: This reached 3 pages on Word document
What am I doing with my life
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Thank so you much for liking this fic so much 😳😳😳 I like hate the fact that I rushed through the second part of the fic and at first this fic was gon be Iono a smut or something but I couldn't bring myself to do it so it was stuck for a long time because u didn't know how to proceed with the story. I could have made it longer into a series but I already have Inner Circle that I haven't even updated in 3 months im trash.
Structurally speaking, the post break up part should be longer and including more details of what their lives were before, and the letter should be a letter n not an email because I can't even 😂😂😂 and like he sends an email and 10 mins later here hoon is??? Totally convenient ha like they still live next door who tf do this. I like have so many thing I dislike bout this fic but thank you for making me feel like maybe it's not that bad!
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