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[lilwhite]

may i feel said he
(i'll squeal said she
just once said he)
it's fun said she

(may i touch said he
how much said she
a lot said he)
why not said she

(let's go said he
not too far said she
what's too far said he
where you are said she)

may i stay said he
(which way said she
like this said he
if you kiss said she

may i move said he
is it love said she)
if you're

Comments

[breschine]

I like this poem. I think I first read it in jr high or high school. However it's not a particularly good poem to _identify_ with. Anything up?

[lilwhite]

Just talking about my time with a boy. That's all. Identify? : )

[breschine]

Touche.