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[VK] Shades of Grey (29/?)

Sep 14, 2009 22:36

Title: Shades of Grey (29/?)
Rating: T
Warnings: Do not read if you don't like OCs, or follow Vampire Knight manga. Please read my previous posts regarding my OC to get the picture. And I think the story will get darker and more complicated... I've warned you...
Word Count: 4,391 words
Characters/Pairings: Zero, Misaki, OCs
Notes: if ( Read more... )

shades of grey, vampire knight, vk, zero, misaki

Comments 2

teruame September 15 2009, 00:00:59 UTC

AWWwwwww...<333333333333333333333333 You're too kind, Annisa! :3

Anyhows...I loved this chapter, particularly! Misaki's feelings shined through here. The emotion of slight envy and nervousness does bring out her human side so much. What's more, Yuuki stands out as herself as well here. :-)

And the interaction with the younglings and Misaki are so adorable! You really took the time to show the believableness of their interactions. :D

The tension is coming! XDDDD I can hardly wait! X33

lilac_ayame September 17 2009, 15:56:48 UTC

Yup. I realized that I rarely took Misaki's point of view, making her appear rather Mary Sue-ish, as Shapby has pointed out before. It seems everyone likes her, and the impression is still there, I realized. While in my mind, she is rather likable, but not enough to make people flock to her.

The problem is, most of the characters that are around her are really perceptive people, enough to know her worth, enough to bring her out. While around other people, such as her high school friends, she isn't this close. I think this'll be made clear in future chapters.

You can say that this part is Misaki arc, while the past is Zero arc.