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lilac_ayame

[VK] Shades of Grey (28/?)

Sep 10, 2009 16:11

Title: Shades of Grey (28/?)
Rating: T
Warnings: Do not read if you don't like OCs, or follow Vampire Knight manga. Please read my previous posts regarding my OC to get the picture. And I think the story will get darker and more complicated... I've warned you...
Word Count: 4,092 words
Characters/Pairings: Zero, Misaki, OCs
Notes: ( Read more... )

shades of grey, vampire knight, vk, zero, misaki

Comments 5

shapby September 12 2009, 15:43:24 UTC

...and the drum rolls!

The thing I like about this chapter is the slight interaction between Zero and Misaki before the ball, in which she slips a handkerchief into his breast pocket. That was so sweeet. Fluff to the max!
I like where you cut the chapter too. Lol.

I noticed you put the word "bribe" to describe me? What form exactly would that take of? Tiramisu? I accept. Brownies? Not my likings, but I accept too. Cheese cake? Absolutely. Lol.

lilac_ayame September 12 2009, 17:56:09 UTC

I just love those simple, domestic moments XDD Stuff like helping the other wear stuff like ties, handkerchief, bracelets, etc.

Actually I tried to cut it somewhere else, but LJ protested: too many words. So this is the best cut I could end it with.

>_> The bribe is not something eligible, unfortunately. I usually bribe you with an update.

lilac_ayame September 12 2009, 18:00:08 UTC

Oops, I mean edible XDD The bribe is actually something eligible.

teruame September 13 2009, 22:58:35 UTC

Whoa...and finally, it shall show up. X333

The suspense in here is wonderful! :DDDD So much so that the moments seem to be passing by whenever the story isn't focused on Esterhazy and...(DUN DUN DUN!) the Kurans. :DDD Wonderful, and interestingly done, of all things. I found this chapter refreshing, and I can hardly wait to see the next chapter. X333

Oh, and...Misaki's fashion sense is wonderful! XDD Just had to say that.

lilac_ayame September 14 2009, 15:32:30 UTC

Finally, some outside conflict :D
It'll eventually come out, either way, considering their position.

It becomes interesting due to the cut, doesn't it? :D

It gives an unique vibe, indeed, the ball, especially having others.

I had to actually browse through the net to find what might suit Misaki. The colors, the material, the style, etc. I'm not a fashion people, really. And I kinda indirectly portrayed it in Misaki, the best dresses she are mostly gifts from the more fashionable people.