Something. Chapter 5.

Nov 10, 2011 22:44

Oh well, earlier finished with chap. 5 than I thought. It could be longer, though, I think. But I made the cut here, so the next chapter is going to be long enough. I don't think there'll be following a lot more chapters. Definitely one, maybe even two more chapters, and then we are at the end. Then I'll concentrate on my other stories... :)   
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femmeslash, andy/miranda

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jah728 November 12 2011, 01:12:22 UTC
I'm enjoying your story. I felt sorry for Andy after her talk with her parents. I'm glad Miranda is so loving and supportive.
Em lucked out with those blackberries. I bet she was sweating for a while.
Thanks for the read.

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lil_sis24 November 12 2011, 09:25:22 UTC
Thanks for your review!
Well, Miranda is in love. Truly. :D So she only can be supportive ;)
Em WAS sweating :D I just hadn't wrote anything about her yet. I don't even know if it will come to a scene from Em's PoV...
Thanks again for your review and I'm glad you enjoyed it :)

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flyhiwithme2 November 12 2011, 22:55:03 UTC
I just sat down to read all five chapters at once and may I say how disappointed I am. I am disappointed that you stopped here. I need to know more! When will the press catch on, will Andy's parent's stir the pot, how will Miranda deal with the comments, will the comments affect Andy's eating, etc...
I do like that Roy was surprised at what went on in the backseat of the car. I think this would be his honest reaction. He may get used to it, but it is a bit of a shocker at first.
Sorry to give you a hard time about stopping, I hope you can tell that I'm teasing. I'm enjoying your point of view and I'll read the next chapter when it's posted. Thank you.

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lil_sis24 November 12 2011, 22:57:45 UTC
I'm so glad you liked it! Thanks for your comment. I'm going to continue as soon as possible... as I'm away next week, it might take a while longer..
I hope I won't dissapoint you again ;D
Thanks again for your comment! :)

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michi6877 November 14 2011, 19:19:37 UTC
Well done!! I thoroughly enjoyed what you have so far of your story, can't wait to read more.

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lil_sis24 November 14 2011, 20:01:00 UTC
Thank you! I'm so glad you enjoyed it!
I'm not at home for this week, so it might not be until next week before I can sit down for writing again, sadly... Thanks for your review! :)

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