Fic "Shame" Dean's POV

Feb 05, 2014 23:05

DEAN

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There should be at least one place

One place in this world I saved

Where I can feel perfectly safe.

Aren’t you supposed to be that place?

I forgot, aren’t you that place Brother?

My scarred flesh, my warm blood

My beating heart, my teardrop

My brother.

¤

I’ve been alone for years. I’ve been alone before you ( Read more... )

rating: gen/g, genre: angst, attribute: dark!sam, genre: drama, genre: fic, season nine, supernatural, character: sam winchester, character: dean winchester, attribute: heartbroken!dean

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tifaching February 6 2014, 01:32:42 UTC
How did you hit the nail on the head so perfectly here? Dean doesn't know any other way to be and Sam was just plain wrong about some of the things he said. Not all, but some. This season is going to kill me.... Gorgeously written, thanks for the stab to the gut. : )

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likiel February 6 2014, 10:05:42 UTC
I'm very happy you think I hit the nail with this one. I wrote this, feeling pretty raw, and God, this season is killng me too. It's getting harder and harder to watch Sam and Dean hurting each other. This is not what I sign up for, I don't want to see that. I don't want to feel that. But here we are. As long as the writers keep this crap up, I'm gonna write like that. I need the outlet. Kiss sweetie.

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bluestar3317 February 6 2014, 03:46:26 UTC
Wow! This was awesome and heart wrenching at the same time. I'm not gonna lie, I cried. These are things that Dean should be thinking. It was absolutely perfect. Great job! Thanks so much for sharing. *wipes tears away*

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likiel February 6 2014, 10:06:13 UTC
Thank you *tissue*

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reggie11 February 6 2014, 05:05:07 UTC
Oh my heart.

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likiel February 6 2014, 10:07:03 UTC
Everytime I watch SPN, I'm like "Be still my heart, cause you're freaking in out"

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likiel February 6 2014, 13:36:23 UTC
S9 is hard isn't it? I want to slap them too. I found myself watching my SPN vids, to remember the time they actually were brothers. *sigh* Thank you for your wonderful review!

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iontas February 7 2014, 23:00:29 UTC
Wow, that just made me gasp. So dead on!

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likiel February 7 2014, 23:05:26 UTC
^^ Thank you *blushing*

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