Uh. Haha. No, I don't really have any words for this. Except that if you're up at 4am scribbling in a notebook, you really can't let a fic idea go
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MOAR!!! JEDWARD, WHAT, SO EXCITED. Okay, so I have never heard of this show and have no idea who these people are, but JEDWARD OKAY I CAN'T NOT READ IT. I found the episode on YouTube and it was actually sort of uncomfortable to watch? because they clearly had no idea what was going on and looked so sad at what they must have assumed was them getting made fun of, and I just wanted to protect them and hug them and what has happened to my life, really? So I'm glad you had that bit in there about them acknowledging it, because it's like, when they have each other NOTHING CAN TOUCH THEM.
But the fic, yes, it's wonderful. You have their voices down beautifully and I can actually hear them saying your dialogue, which rarely happens so naturally when I read fic. It's interesting seeing them from an outside POV, but all of your insights make so much sense and give the whole thing some depth. And uh, it's hot. JOHN LICKING EDWARD'S FAACEEE I WILL NEVER GET OVER THAT.
Also: Christ, if their music career goes downhill-which Noel is
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Oh god, yeah, the episode was pretty uncomfortable in places. NMTB sort of has a reputation for kind of "bullying" its guests, and sometimes it's clear that it's all in good fun and the person is cool with going along with it, but with Jedward I felt weird because you just can't TELL if they 100% understand. Which made me dislike everybody else a little bit, even Noel who I generally love, because it's like beating up someone who can't fight back, you know? I'm constantly torn on whether or not it seriously all goes over their heads, or whether they totally know but absolutely refuse to let it get to them (to the extent that they're basically pretending it's not happening). I mean, maybe part of me just wants to believe they're not stupid, but there were moments during the show where Edward would look at John in this way that kind of seemed to say either "don't laugh, they're making fun of us" or "ugh, they're just being dicks, ignore them." And if they DO get it, then I have a slightly crazy amount of admiration for them, because it
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Maybe I would feel differently if I still thought they were annoying as fuck and didn't love them as much as I do, but you're right--the criticism they get is rather vicious sometimes, and that makes me so sad, because they just seem so innocent and like, they like everyone and even if yeah, they kinda suck at what they do, that's no reason to be so mean.
I pretty much constantly want to see what they're like whey there are no cameras in front of them, because while I bet that they're still fucking crazy and impulsive, there were moments in that show when you can see them toning it down and restraining themselves, so I'm guessing the ADHD is partially in keeping with their image, and that they're more calm when they're alone. All of which makes me think they know more or less perfectly well when they're being made of, and honestly just know how to ignore it, which kind of BLOWS MY MIND.
JESUS, OKAY, NOW I'M PSYCHOANALYZING AND RAMBLING.
In conclusion, THIS: I don't want them to fail at what they love, or end up with no CHOICE but
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Their criticism really is kind of intense. It seems so crazy to me and I can't work out if it's just because I like them, but like - I don't know, even celebrities I find annoying, I don't like, wish death on them. And the fact that they're so cute and happy all the time, and seem so innocent, definitely makes it worse.
Oh my goddd I would love to see that, too. I've been thinking about it lately actually because I watched this video from X Factor times and I was so amazed by how calm they seemed. I mean, they're hardly laidback, but when you compare that to how they are now? I sort of assume that, like you said, it's partly an image thing, but I wonder if maybe the increased fame/excitement has actually changed the way they act as well. It's interesting
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Give me incest and twins and I forget that I don't know who these people are and read it anyway because I love your writing and twincest is such a kink of mine. Also, this is why Google is our friend; so I can have visual references for reading along.
I laughed out loud at this in quite a few places; Noel's thought processes were hilarious and it was all win. Usually when I laugh at porn it is not because it's genuinely amusing, but because it is so, so bad. What with turgid members and cocks spewing jizz like firehoses--laugh or cry, ya know? But THIS is fucking brilliant all the way through and I enjoyed every word, even when I was doubled up over my keyboard laughing.
That poor sofa and Noel's concern for it... lmao.
You have got to write Noel fucking Edward now. You must for it will be gloriously sexy and made of win. Bonus if he makes Edward whimper and scream.
Awww, I'm so glad it made you laugh. When I'm writing fic I never know if things are going to be amusing to anyone but me, and then at the end of it I'm always like "this isn't even funny, it's just RIDICULOUS." So yay.
The sofa was legit one of my favourite parts, I had to hold myself back from mentioning it more often. The thing is, I've written two other stories involving Simon Amstell's dressing room and a sofa, one where he and Noel had sex on it and another where he sat on it with Patrick Wolf and had some tea. So I had this personal canon thing going on whereby the sofa was really meaningful to Simon and he wanted Noel to look after it, and preferably not have wild, sofa-destroying sex with twins on it. Idk idk my brain is a weird place.
And oh GOD don't even tempt me with the Noel/Edward sex. Auuugh. I decided early on that they wouldn't go that far in this, but once I started thinking about it I had to include at least a MENTION, but as soon as I mentioned it I wanted to write more. Hnnng.
There was just SO MUCH funny in this, the constant allusions to the twins being sweet boys, but possibly not the brightest crayons in the box (and I agree from the bit of digging I've seen; pretty, but a bit dim). That stuff was hilarious, esp. the line about puppies hearing 'walk' that the commenter below me mentioned. I was seriously cracking up at this from about here:
Noel thinks for a further moment. To be honest, the shock is receding now, and it's beginning to feel like less of a big deal. What consenting adults do in the privacy of their own homes, and that. Then again, calling Jedward adults is a little bit of a stretch, and more importantly, this isn't their home.
After that I was utterly lost. I just loved the whole calmly reasoning way he was going about and then--WAIT!--there at the end.
The sofa is very important. I don't really know this sofa, but it made an impression on me. :D
*tempts-tempts-tempts* But you've got to. You already gave such a great hint and now it is your solemn duty as an awesome writer to follow
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Lol, I'm so glad, seriously, because I don't think humour is one of my strong points and it's always hard combining it with porn, because you don't want one to overpower the other too much.
And oh goddddddddd, DP is like one of my secret shameful kinks auuuuugh WHY DID YOU HAVE TO GO AND PUT THAT IDEA IN MY HEAD, NOW IT WILL NEVER LEAVE. Oh god, and it makes SENSE, too, because if Noel was fucking Edward and it's like the first time anyone but John has done that, John is going to be so possessive and jealous and want to be a part of it. It makes sense for there to be a sequel, too, for the two of them to be like HAY NOEL TEACH US MORE ABOUT SEX and him to be like *facepalm* WHAT HAVE I GOTTEN MYSELF INTO.
Okay. I can't promise anything. But this is clearly going to go round and round in my head all day and if I end up writing something, I end up writing something. *surrenders*
It's so funny that you picked out that line, because I literally changed it at the last minute before posting! I messed with it for a bit, so I'm glad I changed it in a way that made you laugh. :D
Thank you. I'm glad you liked it! The twins did wear Noel down awfully fast, didn't they? Probably that was partly because I was impatient, but also because I feel like that's fairly in keeping with Noel's character. Like, a couple of attempts at being the responsible adult, and then "eh, fuck it." I'm glad you thought he was in character because it's been a while since I've written him.
And you quoted another line I wasn't sure about! I almost didn't put the puppy bit in because I felt like it was too creepy. The whole time, actually, I kept feeling like I was making Jedward act way too childlike, but THAT'S HOW THEY ARE IN REAL LIFE, I couldn't help it.
Oooh, thank you for the comm recs. I do remember booshslashhaven being weird about incest, actually, so I'll stick to blue_boosh and see how that goes. XD
Oh my god, really?? That makes all of this worth it! I did wonder if it'd crossed ANYONE'S mind while watching the episode. I'm so glad to have fulfilled that wish for you. :D
I KIND OF ALREADY WROTE IT. I did it really quickly so I still have to edit and stuff, but it should be up pretty soon.
There was TOUCHING, how could anyone not want to have Noel & Jedward together after that? :D Forgot to say it in my last post but a massive Thank You for writing it! ♥ heeee i can ship Jedward with almost anyone, i even ship John with Keith Lemon after he drank his jizz on Celebrity Juice, even though Keith's not real and his jizz wasn't either, but yeah.. John drinking jizz out of a mug. Those boys will really do anything! ;D
I feel like I should have a go at a well thought out comment here, but it's late and I'm a wee bit tipsy so lets just say this was brilliant. Funny and hot and perfectly in character.
Thank you. ♥ Ridiculous porn does not always require a well-thought out comment, especially when tipsy - completely understood! I'm glad you enjoyed it.
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But the fic, yes, it's wonderful. You have their voices down beautifully and I can actually hear them saying your dialogue, which rarely happens so naturally when I read fic. It's interesting seeing them from an outside POV, but all of your insights make so much sense and give the whole thing some depth. And uh, it's hot. JOHN LICKING EDWARD'S FAACEEE I WILL NEVER GET OVER THAT.
Also: Christ, if their music career goes downhill-which Noel is ( ... )
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I pretty much constantly want to see what they're like whey there are no cameras in front of them, because while I bet that they're still fucking crazy and impulsive, there were moments in that show when you can see them toning it down and restraining themselves, so I'm guessing the ADHD is partially in keeping with their image, and that they're more calm when they're alone. All of which makes me think they know more or less perfectly well when they're being made of, and honestly just know how to ignore it, which kind of BLOWS MY MIND.
JESUS, OKAY, NOW I'M PSYCHOANALYZING AND RAMBLING.
In conclusion, THIS: I don't want them to fail at what they love, or end up with no CHOICE but ( ... )
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Oh my goddd I would love to see that, too. I've been thinking about it lately actually because I watched this video from X Factor times and I was so amazed by how calm they seemed. I mean, they're hardly laidback, but when you compare that to how they are now? I sort of assume that, like you said, it's partly an image thing, but I wonder if maybe the increased fame/excitement has actually changed the way they act as well. It's interesting ( ... )
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I laughed out loud at this in quite a few places; Noel's thought processes were hilarious and it was all win. Usually when I laugh at porn it is not because it's genuinely amusing, but because it is so, so bad. What with turgid members and cocks spewing jizz like firehoses--laugh or cry, ya know? But THIS is fucking brilliant all the way through and I enjoyed every word, even when I was doubled up over my keyboard laughing.
That poor sofa and Noel's concern for it... lmao.
You have got to write Noel fucking Edward now. You must for it will be gloriously sexy and made of win. Bonus if he makes Edward whimper and scream.
*bites knuckles*
Lovely as ever, lady.
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Awww, I'm so glad it made you laugh. When I'm writing fic I never know if things are going to be amusing to anyone but me, and then at the end of it I'm always like "this isn't even funny, it's just RIDICULOUS." So yay.
The sofa was legit one of my favourite parts, I had to hold myself back from mentioning it more often. The thing is, I've written two other stories involving Simon Amstell's dressing room and a sofa, one where he and Noel had sex on it and another where he sat on it with Patrick Wolf and had some tea. So I had this personal canon thing going on whereby the sofa was really meaningful to Simon and he wanted Noel to look after it, and preferably not have wild, sofa-destroying sex with twins on it. Idk idk my brain is a weird place.
And oh GOD don't even tempt me with the Noel/Edward sex. Auuugh. I decided early on that they wouldn't go that far in this, but once I started thinking about it I had to include at least a MENTION, but as soon as I mentioned it I wanted to write more. Hnnng.
♥ Thank you!
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Noel thinks for a further moment. To be honest, the shock is receding now, and it's beginning to feel like less of a big deal. What consenting adults do in the privacy of their own homes, and that. Then again, calling Jedward adults is a little bit of a stretch, and more importantly, this isn't their home.
After that I was utterly lost. I just loved the whole calmly reasoning way he was going about and then--WAIT!--there at the end.
The sofa is very important. I don't really know this sofa, but it made an impression on me. :D
*tempts-tempts-tempts* But you've got to. You already gave such a great hint and now it is your solemn duty as an awesome writer to follow ( ... )
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And oh goddddddddd, DP is like one of my secret shameful kinks auuuuugh WHY DID YOU HAVE TO GO AND PUT THAT IDEA IN MY HEAD, NOW IT WILL NEVER LEAVE. Oh god, and it makes SENSE, too, because if Noel was fucking Edward and it's like the first time anyone but John has done that, John is going to be so possessive and jealous and want to be a part of it. It makes sense for there to be a sequel, too, for the two of them to be like HAY NOEL TEACH US MORE ABOUT SEX and him to be like *facepalm* WHAT HAVE I GOTTEN MYSELF INTO.
Okay. I can't promise anything. But this is clearly going to go round and round in my head all day and if I end up writing something, I end up writing something. *surrenders*
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Thank you. I'm glad you liked it! The twins did wear Noel down awfully fast, didn't they? Probably that was partly because I was impatient, but also because I feel like that's fairly in keeping with Noel's character. Like, a couple of attempts at being the responsible adult, and then "eh, fuck it." I'm glad you thought he was in character because it's been a while since I've written him.
And you quoted another line I wasn't sure about! I almost didn't put the puppy bit in because I felt like it was too creepy. The whole time, actually, I kept feeling like I was making Jedward act way too childlike, but THAT'S HOW THEY ARE IN REAL LIFE, I couldn't help it.
Oooh, thank you for the comm recs. I do remember booshslashhaven being weird about incest, actually, so I'll stick to blue_boosh and see how that goes. XD
♥ Thank you so much.
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asdfg now you have to write more!! i'm totally behind portraitofafool's suggestion of John & Noel dp-ing Edward! *__*
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I KIND OF ALREADY WROTE IT. I did it really quickly so I still have to edit and stuff, but it should be up pretty soon.
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heeee i can ship Jedward with almost anyone, i even ship John with Keith Lemon after he drank his jizz on Celebrity Juice, even though Keith's not real and his jizz wasn't either, but yeah.. John drinking jizz out of a mug. Those boys will really do anything! ;D
asfg really?! Can't wait!! *__*
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Yeah, the touching was all it took for me too. XD I'm easily pleased.
(And oh god, I saw a clip of that on Youtube and had noooo idea as to the context, I sort of couldn't believe what I was seeing.)
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