Act of Play - Well, We Built These Dreams of Sand 1/1

[lifesscar]

Series: Act of Play
Title: Well, We Built These Dreams of Sand
Word Count: 8633
Rating: R
Disclaimer: The title is being politely borrowed from Rise Against. This is, obviously, fake and did not happen. I am merely borrowing the names and faces of real life people and none of this is meant in any way to harm their reputation. This is a work of

Comments

[cavaletti]

I'm so glad that you updated, I was afraid that you might have quit working on it, and that would be so so sad.

I love this fic. Jared is just so adorable with the kissing and hugging and cuddling. Can’t wait for a new update.

[lifesscar]

Aww, I'm sorry for making to seem like that =( No, I'm not quitting on it... just getting a bit aggravated. It takes me a while to work through everything I want for it =(

I honestly love Jared's character, he's sweet. AT least to me.

Thank you! <3

[mre_quecky]

Woah, loved! Just found and caught up and yeah, absolutely in love with it :D

[lifesscar]

Thank you! I'm glad you loved it =)

<3

[kuhekabir]

yeah, update...i read the last two updates because somehow i missed both of them, not sure how, but i really like that you are still writing this story, i hope there will be more soon...hugs...

[lifesscar]

I hope there's more soon as well. =D I really enjoy writing this so I don't see myself abandoning it.

Thanks <3

[fpvs]

Wow. This was another awesome chapter. Full of typos I'd normally point out, but me tired! TIRED!!! *hehe* I need the sleep, but wanted to read more and all that :P

And there's just some way... A lot of people talk about how "X wrote a story with non-con and it was done tastefully/whatever", but you are definitely one of those that haven't used it as the only important thing to happen. I certainly can often only read such stories at certain times. But yours is a story about a man struggling to cope. What he is coping with affects what other things are affected, it isn't the thing that the reader must think about every single second, not even when that is what is being dealt with in a section of the story!

So, yeah! Wow. *bounces* You need to, like, umm... somehow find time to write even though I don't think you'll have that time quite at the moment. woe.

[lifesscar]

Typos, no =( Seriously? Damn it =( I thought I had caught them all.

I've already written a couple of stories that were focused mainly on non-con and the effects so, that's really not what this story is truly about. Yeah, it's the cause and is a serious issue but I'm trying to remember I'm focusing on the now.

Lmao, I do need to.

I'm trying =(

Thanks <3

[fpvs]

I am sorry... I ought not to mention typos if I do not point them out. That was mean of me. :( I blame it on my being tired when I commented! :( *pouts*

I'm glad that it is not the past which you are focussing on. It's what makes this story so very readable. The past has HAPPENED. And it is the NOW that is being focussed on! :D

[culturegeek76]

Yay an update. I'm only a month late to the party, oops. This chapter was satisfying, because while I'm horrified for Jen that the video was out there, Steve needs to go to jail for ever. He is now not just a pedophile, but a child pornographer - and they can hit him with a bazillionty charges for that.

I'm glad Jen gave in to Jared, even if it gets fucked up in the end, I think it'll be worth it to at least try.

[lifesscar]

Thank you! <3

Steve will hopefully not make another appearance.

Yeah, it was about time Jensen gave in. We'll see how it turns out =D

Thank you, again =D