Fic: Steady As She Goes (50/86), Blue Cortina, dakfinv

Oct 09, 2007 20:41


Title: Steady As She Goes (50/86)
Author: dak
Word Count: 1231 this part; [92,821 overall]
Summary for Whole: After an accidental shooting at the station, Gene struggles to keep his team from tearing themselves apart while his and Sam's friendship is pushed to the limits.
Summary this Part: Where did Gene go? Where is Sam going?
Rating: still Blue-ish ( Read more... )

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sytaxia October 10 2007, 01:13:38 UTC
The plate metaphor was really, really well done, and Gene's flashback to Sam's admission that he was from 2006 was certainly interesting, although I'm really hoping that we'll be able to see much more of the interaction between Gene and Sam during his delirium - Sam had to tell Gene a hell of a lot more for Gene to have initially called Merrick in... And is Sam going to be all right with Annie? Or is Annie going to be all right with Sam?

So many questions... Aargh!

Yet another fantastic chapter! Bravo!

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dakfinv October 11 2007, 02:13:22 UTC
Thank you! Just put up the next part which I think will answer a few of your questions, satisfactorily I hope.

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jpgr October 10 2007, 01:15:28 UTC
Yay! The missus taking and drinking Gene's whiskey. Yay! Annie taking Sam to her place to care for him. Yay! Gene realizing that because something cracked but can be repaired means it doesn't have to be replaced.

Love it!

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dakfinv October 11 2007, 02:13:55 UTC
Thank you!! I'm glad you liked it.

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duckyone October 10 2007, 01:29:38 UTC
Please let the Missus prevail. It's time to bring this broken team back together and if anyone can do it, she can. She is the only one objective enough to think clearly. Please let Merrick disappear, he's caused enough trouble and Sam doesn't need him anymore. He'll just crack the plate into parts too small to be glued back together.

Thank you for yet another extremely well written chapter. Well, this one and the last which I neglected to comment on. I can't wait for the next one.

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dakfinv October 11 2007, 02:14:48 UTC
Thank you for commenting! I just put up the next chapter.

I'll see what I can do about the Missus and Merrick...

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starrylizard October 10 2007, 01:41:49 UTC
I love your Mrs Hunt! :)

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dakfinv October 11 2007, 02:15:19 UTC
Thank you! I love writing her.

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liquorishflame October 10 2007, 02:47:15 UTC
"I din’t kill ‘im!" An unseen Gene called from the direction of their bedroom.
"Good!" She shouted back. "Think of what the neighbors would say!"
Your missus is For The Win :)
And gotta love the Gene/Sam vibe happening.
...And don’t think for a second that I’ll let you have a second go.
Wow :)
Excellent chapter, thanks for the quick update! :D Sam's getting better, getting worse, getting better. Can't wait to see what happens next! :)

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dakfinv October 11 2007, 02:16:16 UTC
Thank you! I've had a lot of fun with Gene's wife. I don't if you'll be happy with what I did Sam in the next part, though...

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