How *insert character of your choice here* Lost His/Her Virginity. Various. Brown Cortinas

[hambelandjemima]

Author: Hambel/

Comments

[saintvic]

There are some very evil choices there but I lovehow you have written them all and not be beaten down by the evil requestors.

Tufty - this had a wonderful feeling of being the adult version of a childrens story

Sukey - felt sorry for her here but like how you have shown her state of mind

the guv - all I can say is this was beautiful and evocative

oswald - interesting take on this evil request (I won't tell you where my mind went when I saw oswald on the list *worries about self*)

vic - like the uncertainty he shows and then the end line is very prophetic

chris - spiderman *grins happily*

ray - and this was my favourite and I am intrigued as to the only one had surpassed him since which I am choosing to interpret as either Chris or Gene.

: )

[duckyone]

There are some very evil choices there but I lovehow you have written them all and not be beaten down by the evil requestors.

evil genius requestors

[hambelandjemima]

Yes, we all know who they are ;)

[saintvic]

Ah yes I wonder who those mad evil genius' are.

[walkerbaby]

I loved chris and the guv. The guv's story was just plain beautiful and somehow fit him so well (kind of gives him that bogart style tough on the outside but really romantic as well). Chris - is it wrong I can imagine him in spidey underroos? Sort of like the church scene in Bubble Boy

[hambelandjemima]

Thanks. I love the Guv. I had to make his special :)

Chris - is it wrong I can imagine him in spidey underroos?
Not wrong at all. My work here is done :)

[maiden74]

These were great fun to read and the Tufty one gave me a good giggle.

[hambelandjemima]

Thanks for reading and commenting. Tufty's always good for a giggle :D

[totallywow]

All of these are so perfect for each character, but I have to say the Guv's is my favourite one: really beautiful.

[hambelandjemima]

Thank you so much. ♥

[draycevixen]

I think you already know how much I ♥ these. The Guv's is so touching, Ray's is so believable and of course I ♥ Tufty.

Oh, and thanks for taking on the Oswald challenge and winning! *bounces*

[hambelandjemima]

And thank you for stretching me as a writer :) I almost gave up on Oswald, but I kept reminding myself it was for a challenge and my stubborness determination kept me going. Glad you think I won that round ♥