New Chapter! Kin and Kisses

[liebesfic]

Several months since the last update, we finally have posted Chapter 33! In two parts, because it was very long, I present you, Chapter 33: Tears and Talks

Story Summary: This story follows the marauders, Lily, and some original characters starting with the summer before their 6th year at Hogwarts. James is trying (and mostly failing) to win the

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[bluealoe]

*squees* When I saw this point, I shouted "YES!" and both my mom and sister stared at me. I had a hard time explaining why I was so excited.

This chapter made my heart hurt. Poor Heather....and while I know Lily is well-meaning, her advice isn't very helpful. Heather and Peter both need to see someone trained in dealing with grief, because they both need help beyond what they can offer to each other. Heather for her survivor's guilt (which was described very well, especially thinking of what she could have done differently) and Peter...well, for everything.

Maia and Emmeline are so cute together. Adolescent rebellion, indeed. :)

Remus' comparison of his relationship with Sirius to wandless magic is something I never would have though of, but in the story it makes sense.

I eagerly await part 2!!

[liebesfic]

Part II is up! It's chapter 34 of fanfiction.net! (and review on fanfic.net so I can catch up to maggs in review count :P)

[bluealoe]

Left a review at FF.n, just for you. :)