Fic: An Evening in June

[liebesfic]

Title: An Evening in June
Author: liebedance 
Beta: none
WIP/Length: complete, 500 words
Pairing/Characters: Lily/James
Rating: PG
Genre: Romance
Summary: For the prompt "If a June night could talk, it would probably boast it invented romance. [Bern Williams]"
Author's Notes: Written for lilyjames_fest Flash Fiction Round

Comments

[imagined_away]

I like how you show them to be so close even when they aren't touching. They just know how the other feels.
Separating for 2 months at the height of the war must be terrifying. Especially with Lily going back to the Muggle world where she'll have less chance to know what's going on. lucky the daily Prophet delivers huh?
They are so cute together. They so obviously need one another and make each other feel better even without words.

[liebesfic]

I'm glad I can adequately distract you from homework! And I'm glad that you liked it. I'm a fan of those two sentences as well.

[bluealoe]

And you did it again, Leah. Understated and beautiful. It expresses so much with so few words.

The first paragraph...awww. He's such a troublemaker, even when he's with Lily, he can't help thinking of those nights of mischief.

the entire night will dissolve into darkness like a poorly done Patronus.

Lovely metaphor!

It's the moments of calm, of peace, that really make life worth living.