Comments | lie_asobarete: "Stay Inside Me"

lie_asobarete

"Stay Inside Me"

Jul 10, 2007 20:31

With every thrust came a fantastically erotic pair of moans. The sound of bodies thrusting into each other were shared with pants from the breathless pair; tall and lean bodies beautifully slick with sweat. Strands of black hair touched by sweat brushed against his face on every upward thrust as his older bandmate's head hovered above just ( Read more... )

gazette fiction, aoi, uruha

Comments 27

lovely_aoi July 11 2007, 04:59:30 UTC

Wow....that was amazing...This was your first time writing yaoi smut? Could have fooled me. You are doing really good! Keep it up! I still love your work,s mut or no smut

lie_asobarete July 11 2007, 06:39:31 UTC

really? cool! i'm relieved :D

aww, and thank you!! i'm glad it was good and you like my work :D

i like that icon, that's a cool design, great picture ;p

jyusou July 11 2007, 06:46:49 UTC

lie_asobarete July 11 2007, 08:45:05 UTC

really? a touch of kinky too? cool i'm glad!

ahhh, good point, good point. I'll keep that in mind. Thank you for commenting and the tip!

hehe, no worries, I'll be posting more :D

your icon made me chuckle ;p

elifletcher October 17 2008, 10:07:54 UTC

Rolling Stones: Black And Blue Review by Charles Shaar Murray, NME , April "THE ROLLING STONES are a really good band, but, like, I consider them like a boys' band because they don't play mens music.

phunky_monkey91 July 11 2007, 07:47:59 UTC

Damn, this was hot, and very well written... sexy, somehow. ^^
Hope to read more of your work, hopefully involving the pairing AoixUruha, which is my favourite one, by the way. XD

lie_asobarete July 11 2007, 08:50:14 UTC

hehe, mysteriously sexy, thank you!

hehe, it's an irresistible paring for smut, definitely plan on doing more with these two.

lol that icon is dangerous... ;p

phunky_monkey91 July 11 2007, 11:17:14 UTC

That icon has a bunch of fans XDD I'm pretty damn satisfied with it, too. ^^

walkin_siesta July 11 2007, 09:04:59 UTC

well, i hope they remember to untangle themselves, soon xD
being stuck... there... dry... is really not pleasant... for both of them xDD
anyway, it's good

lie_asobarete July 11 2007, 09:22:09 UTC

lol i hope so too ;p

haha yea i forgot about that little aspect, thank you for commenting! :)

I is amused at your icon ;p

wats_blue July 11 2007, 09:13:40 UTC

that was HOT!!!

lie_asobarete July 11 2007, 09:22:23 UTC

Thank you!!