Comments | lie_asobarete: "Stay Inside Me"

lie_asobarete

"Stay Inside Me"

Jul 10, 2007 20:31

With every thrust came a fantastically erotic pair of moans. The sound of bodies thrusting into each other were shared with pants from the breathless pair; tall and lean bodies beautifully slick with sweat. Strands of black hair touched by sweat brushed against his face on every upward thrust as his older bandmate's head hovered above just ( Read more... )

gazette fiction, aoi, uruha

Comments 27

aitotchideto July 11 2007, 10:03:35 UTC

and you said this was your first time writing smut... it's just simply HOT!

lie_asobarete July 11 2007, 10:42:50 UTC

Well... first time writing yaoi smut.

Thank you! I'm glad this was successful :D

slowdead July 11 2007, 11:08:41 UTC

I liked it xD *pants*
XDD

lie_asobarete July 11 2007, 11:16:22 UTC

awesome! I'm glad you liked it!

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lie_asobarete July 11 2007, 19:25:22 UTC

awesome - thank you!

pixie198807 July 12 2007, 21:41:15 UTC

Dude this is straight great smut!!! I love it you do alot better than me!! I love it!!

lie_asobarete July 13 2007, 05:39:05 UTC

aw, thank you! I appreciate the comment :)

pixie198807 July 13 2007, 05:44:55 UTC

welcome!!

totchi_san_622 July 16 2007, 05:02:31 UTC

Holycrap. o_o

This is fine the way it is. It's already HOT. =D I like it. <3

lie_asobarete July 16 2007, 09:52:34 UTC

Awesome!

Thank you Thank you!

hehe, yes, Aoi and Uruha are perfection ;p - nice icon!