Fic: We Are The Abyss

[entangled_now]

Title: We Are The Abyss
Fandom: Supernatural
Pairing: Sam/Dean
Rating: R
Word Count: 7,859
Spoilers: None
Warnings: Incest, the Apocalypse, death
Summary/Prompt: Dean never figured he'd be there for the end of the world.
AN: Written for storydivagirl for the apocalyptothon . Huge thank you to sarren for betaing this for me.

Comments

[zeitheist]

... material shifting to reveal skin laced through with flares of black...

I actually had a moment of gut-wrenching, heart-stopping, "NO!". Oh, Dean. Oh, Sam. I was tearing up by the last line, and I had to sit here and sniffle dejectedly for a minute. You broke the boys!

There are so many beautiful lines in this, grim images and harsh situations, but still eloquently expressed. It's haunting. The last three paragraphs of the first section are excellent, but here are some more I liked:

"He looks really lonely. Late night pay-per-view lonely. If I was this thing, I'd eat him."

It was a crumpled mess of blue-white limbs. They'd contracted in death like a spider's.

"That's really nice," Dean said, and finished the rest of his burger

Dean ignored him in favour of fries, lots of fries. Sam looked away until he'd at least managed to contain them inside his mouth.

There were two boys in the back seat, no more than ten or twelve. They looked for all the world like they'd tumbled together and fallen asleep.

The child seemed to be made

[entangled_now]

I really loved the opportunity to just tear everything down in this (you rarely get to do that conscience free in fic.) So I'm very glad that the whole thing worked for you, I'm going to take that as a huge compliment.

It's wonderful when people point out the parts they liked so thank you for that! And it's nice when they're parts that I really wanted to work.

I fixed the tiny formatting, thanks!

[fredbassett]

This was really superb. Heart rending and beautifully written.

[entangled_now]

Thank you very much, I loved writing the apocalyptic storyline in this. So I'm very glad you liked it.

[dmlpacker]

Oh, Jesus this plot is amazing. You wrote it perfectly though I'm sad we never found out exactly what was going on. I'm assuming it was the result of some experiment in the lab that was burned down...

[entangled_now]

Thank you very much, I'm really glad the plot worked for you. And yes that's definitely where it all started from.

[entangled_now]

Thank you so much! I really wanted this whole thing to work even though it couldn't have a happy ending. So I'm really glad you liked it.

[entangled_now]

The world not ending in plague and horror is always a plus :D

[honeynougat]

I literally do not have words for this...

*is stunned*

[entangled_now]

I'm going to take leaving people stunned as a compliment. Thank you!

[honeynougat]

Oh please do!! It really was fantastic ^_^