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One Piece fic-Let's Not Lose Our Heads (Oneshot)

Jul 03, 2010 09:01

Title: Let's Not Lose Our Heads
Rating: PG
Characters: All Strawhats up to and including Brook. Mainly Usopp and some Luffy featured, though.
Word Count: 4k, almost exactly
Summary: The Strawhats get executed, starting with Luffy. Usopp, digging his own grave, (haha) narrates the ordeal. Oneshot. This is a comedy. (No, really!)

( Heads are gonna roll for this. Most probably, mine. )

zoro, pg, sanji, brook, usopp, oneshot, humor, one piece, fanfic, let's not lose our heads, luffy, franky

Comments 10

night_mare_chan July 3 2010, 02:16:25 UTC

Heee. Wonderful. I approve 100% except for the song. Don't like the song.

liashi July 3 2010, 21:52:23 UTC

Clearly, you just have no taste in music.

Thanks for the comment, tho. And for all your help brainstorming and writing this thing. Only five months in the making! XD

hsiuism July 3 2010, 06:42:40 UTC

Awesome :D Usopp was the perfect character to narrate. And I vote in favor of Ballroom Blitz!

liashi July 3 2010, 22:02:18 UTC

Thanks♥ And *_* Yeeess. I wanna see a good AMV for One Piece using that song! Not only does it seem like one fighting would time well to, there are just some lines that are too convenient to pass up. ("She could kill you with a wink of her eye"? Someone tell me I'm not the only one who sees Ivankov there. XDDD)

AWESOME! ah_18 July 3 2010, 10:12:18 UTC

What is this?! Perfection I say! I approve 100% aswell!! It's exactly how I'd imagine them to act, speak and all that! Hilarious!!! :D I wish they'd make a movie out of this!

Re: AWESOME! liashi July 3 2010, 22:16:58 UTC

Thanks~♥ Alas, the closest it might ever get to a "movie" would be if I were to sketch some of the scenes and/or the "moment of execution" photos like I've been thinking of.

Re: AWESOME! red_savant July 3 2010, 23:21:29 UTC

Wow... that was hilarious. =D I didn't expect it from the words "Strawhats get executed" and "Comedy" in the same sentence, but you pulled it off very well.

Also, I love your icon to death. Just sayin'.

Re: AWESOME! liashi July 7 2010, 06:15:26 UTC

Thanks, glad you enjoyed! =D

gure126 July 11 2010, 15:08:59 UTC

Woo-hoo! That was awesome. Poor Usopp. You did a great job with his voice, and I loved the executions. Yay! What a delightfully morbid, messed up island full of nutjobs. ^_^ Ah, also loved the ending with Usopp and the photos, that was...really nicely done. Very, very.

liashi July 11 2010, 18:58:48 UTC

Now that it's finished, I'm missing the experience of writing it. It was a good time.

And hey, everyone needs a little entertainment in their lives, right? At least they don't need to see real blood to have fun. XDD

Thanks ♥