[fanfic] Kiss Me Softly, Chapter 3 (Gravitation, 30kisses, Eiri x Shuichi)

[liana_bluestar]

I think I only have two fanfiction entries for today. Could be more. I'm trying to locate everything. :P Maybe I should create a folder for the LJ community challenges. That might be easier than browsing through all of my fanfic folders

Comments

[photoash]

Interesting... I hope you follow up with more moments around this :)

[liana_bluestar]

Better have Kleenex or Puffs tissues ready then. I'm going for a tearjerker!

[photoash]

Ah... emotional stories can be done well like that. Recently I thought Scarlet did a great job on Etude, however I thought it seemed like she ended that story just as it started getting really good heh but eh each author's ideas are different :)

[liana_bluestar]

I thought her ending was really good. :) Could have had a little more but then I've done the same thing myself so . . . ;) -snickers-

[vialia]

You've caught my attention with this entry. <3 And also nice to see Eiri caring for his lover again (just skimmed through some lousy fic where he mishandles Shu ;_;).

I find myself questioning about the beginning of this story (why and how Shu got into the hospital). I wanted to ask if this chapter stands alone or do Ch 1 and 2 reveal the beginning of this story?

[liana_bluestar]

They're all interconnected.

[silver_magess]

Folders are a good idea I found. Even better is to make a folder for each seperate challenge and each pair/character you're writing for. It definitly saves time.

I was going to say this was a possible hospital examination post-rape, but your summary leads me to believe otherwise and assume that Shuichi's going to die of some dreadful disease. And being the horrible person I am, the thing I'm most eager to find out is what the disease is should my assumption be correct.

[liana_bluestar]

Post-rape? You mean the whole Taki incident? I don't think Shu went. At least, that's always been my impression.