in lieu of having a life

[lettersandliars]

I bring fic! For Hanna Is Not a Boy's Name, which you should read if you're not already.

feeding on fever
conrad/toni/veser, r, 4451 words

Comments

[anonymous]

I've seriously got to wonder where all the comments went. Surely they've been sucked into a vortex or something. THIS thing is too amazing to not have at least 50 comments. Its damn gorgeous.

... maybe people are just scared of Toni. More please? This is too awesome.

[lettersandliars]

Aw, thank you <3

I hope it's not that people are afraid of Toni! She's too awesome for that. Anyway, I don't know if there will be a direct continuation of this but I'll definitely write more for the fandom.

[0armoredsoul0]

I can't say I've ever come across this romantic idea before, but God DAMN, have you done a good job with it!
Seriously, this is just cool, cause you were able to not only keep all the characters IN character, you provided logical progression of their relationship and threw in some hilarious little vignettes of Conrad's neurosis taking hold.
This is AWESOME.
^^

[lettersandliars]

That's probably because this makes absolutely no canonical sense XD I'm glad you felt that everyone was in character, though! Conrad's a little freak, bless him <3

Thanks for reading!

[blowjobsalways]

I totally agree with the anon above. Where is everyone? This was so cute, in character, and a joy to read. I really like how you paced their interations, and the way that Conrad slowly started to give in.

Probably one of my favourite fics in this fandom, seriously.

[lettersandliars]

Thank you so much! I'm happy you liked it <3

Thank you for writing this, I adored it! ... and now I am compelled to tell you why!

[thelovemafia]

Firstly, my apologies for not commenting earlier: I really enjoyed this story, and I wanted to be able to write a proper comment! ♥ The day I read this I only managed to link this story on my journal and tell people I loved it, but to properly say how much and why I loved it takes me more time. *laughs*

First off- so much love for writing Conrad/Toni/Veser, with Toni/Veser (or the other way around), Toni/Conrad and Veser/Conrad elements! There were so many points in this story that I just had to stop and pause for a moment because I wanted to make it last longer. ♥

And secondly - thank you for writing it this way. I am all about the stories that take the time and the effort to do build-up properly, that bring the characters to a time and place where what they do becomes natural, and this is definitely one of them. I feel incredibly spoiled to have been able to have fic like this in the Hanna!fandom

... and now with even more TLDR (e.g. Part 2 of Why I Loved This)

[thelovemafia]

but Conrad has heard enough 'sorry's for a lifetime so he leans in and presses his mouth around the word. Toni lets out a little squeal of delight and curls her arms around his neck. Veser jumps out of whatever dark corner he was hiding in and lands on the other side of Conrad.

"Knew you'd come around," he smirks against Conrad's neck. Conrad, surprising himself, leans back into the touch.
As I said up there: I loved the way you handled this most of all, because you had Conrad decide where he wanted to take it.

"It's okay if you're freaked," Toni murmurs, suddenly close to him, and Conrad stiffens, feeling the press of her knees against the backs of his. He keeps the covers tight around his head, his eyes squeezed shut. "I mean, it is really, really weird, but. We all kind of were already, you know?" He does know.
And this is what I meant by taking the characters to a place where what happens, happens naturally. ♥ I loved that logic / substantiation with 'I know this is weird, but we're all kind of weird already.' *grin* Very

i love this comment possibly too much for words

[lettersandliars]

Okay, first of all, ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥ You cannot comprehend how happy this comment made me!

I am all about the stories that take the time and the effort to do build-up properly, that bring the characters to a time and place where what they do becomes natural
Originally this was just going to be a PWP ficmix with some sexy songs about vampires and werewolves, but my brain decided that there had to be logic and backstory and then there ended up being no actual porn. So, yeah, my writing process likes to take my intentions and tell me where to shove 'em.

VESER ♥ He's a lech and a brat and I irrationally love him to pieces. Like, I think he and I both have come to terms with the fact that he'll never be a nice guy, but that doesn't mean he has to be a horrible person. Not completely horrible, anyway. I'm glad you think I did him justice ♥

'I know this is weird, but we're all kind of weird already.'Fandom needs more Toni, stat. When I first saw Toni I kind of thought she'd be a like a female Hanna, like, she

[anonymous]

I don't know how to properly say this,but this.Is pretty damn awesome.
I like how messy things get and how...room-matey everything is.No,really.Un-explainably interesting :D

[lettersandliars]

Thank you! :)

Ohyeah and

[emignant]

Um,this thought just occurred to me,after re-reading it several times;this would make one heck of a movie....'Cept.Most people besides Hinabn fans wouldn't probably get why there's a vampire/were-wolf/selkie threesome in the movie :( (Gah,and I was already getting my hopes up XP)
But,I imagine it would make for a pretty good comic too :D
Also,I really like how, um...hidden some things are and how you don't hint at stuff as directly,like how it's not as porny as some fics I've read(Especially with Veser in them),I mean,it's porny,but sort of a very delicate kind.You make this whole thing seem so normal and natural in a way :)
Oh,yeah,sorry I didn't write this with the first post.I just take so long to write a decent comment,Sorry :(