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Jul 24, 2008 13:12

Title: Just an Ordinary Day
Author: halflight007
Character/Pairing/Group: Phoenix/Miles, Trucy

Prompt: Kink meme~~~~~: The kink I want is: no kink. Married sex. Phoenix & Edgeworth. Just an everday scenario -- wash the dishes, put the kids to bed, watch the news, go to bed, have sex, roll over, sleep. I thought it might be an amusing contrast to all the ( Read more... )

i'm not paying for your insulin dammit, oneshot, narumitsu, fluuuuuuuuff, phoenix wright

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metalkatt July 24 2008, 18:45:58 UTC

I really, really enjoyed this. It isn't always just about getting off, it can be about what's a little higher up, in the chest, as well as what's in the trousers.

Well done!

lenarix_klinde July 25 2008, 01:57:34 UTC

...Up in the chest...you mean the cholesterol-clogged arteries!? :D *shot* Kidding, kidding.

Thank you for reading, though!

dexanari July 24 2008, 18:52:43 UTC

That was very nice, hehe...

Oh! I know the reference, it's from Chobits; the book that Chi reads called 'A City With No People'.

I am weeaboo, hear me rawr. >:3

lenarix_klinde July 25 2008, 01:58:12 UTC

And by "roar" you mean "SQUEEEE" amirite? :D

(thank you btw.)

dreamdischarger July 24 2008, 19:21:44 UTC

I actually kind of liked how the sex was more about fluffy happy diabetes inducing love instead of just the physical stuff. It was sweet and I liked it :D

lenarix_klinde July 25 2008, 01:59:35 UTC

*points to tags regarding policy on insulin purchase*

Yeah, I admit, I'm a total sap. I like sexytiemz, but they always have to hint at a comfortable relationship with lots of trust and affection behind it.

Thank you!

xxbloodsakuraxx July 24 2008, 19:36:23 UTC

For some reason this line makes me all warm and fuzzy:

"One of his hands snuck up and laced itself with Miles’; the other’s hand curled around his without hesitation. Their bands clacked together, gleaming wanly in the darkness."

I think it was just the mentioning of the wedding bands that made me all *squee* ^_^

lenarix_klinde July 25 2008, 01:59:52 UTC

A sentiment I agree with ~~~<3

mercilouslia July 24 2008, 20:09:15 UTC

♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥

lenarix_klinde July 25 2008, 02:00:20 UTC

Substantial commenting? LOLWHUT!? Ow, ow, okay, I was KIDDING.

mercilouslia July 25 2008, 12:33:30 UTC

Substantial comments are for losers. D:<

Besides - you should already know how epically fucking..epic you are. I mean really, you should have some knowledge that your stories make me go ":DDDDDDDDDDDDD" and often cause nosebleeds.

Seriously, hon. You never cease to make me haaaappppyyyyy. ♥