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lenageek

The Right to Love - Part 15

Nov 09, 2011 17:43

Title: The Right to Love

Spoilers: Takes place after ep 101 (8x09) after Pepa and Silvia have become engaged. This is a sequel to my previous PepSi fanfic, In Love’s Defense. My fic follows LHDP up to ep 101 but departs from the show at that point - ep 104 never has and never will exist in this version of Pepa and Silvia’s world.

Rating: NC-17 for ( Read more... )

fan fic, rating: nc-17, pepa/silvia

Comments 23

imayfan November 10 2011, 08:16:48 UTC

nice to see your muse is back!

lenageek November 10 2011, 18:48:52 UTC

Gracias, guapa! ;D

selinakris November 10 2011, 21:29:44 UTC

Thanks for updating, it's a shame there are so few Pepsi stories anymore, so it's nice to see your dedication to continue.

lenageek November 11 2011, 01:52:51 UTC

Hola! You're welcome for updating. It is a shame that there's so few PepSi stories anymore, so I'm happy to oblige. I still see quite a few recent comments when I look at the PepSiEnglish clips on YT, so I still think people are discovering the story, which I think is awesome!

reiimy97 November 11 2011, 12:40:06 UTC

I'm happy with Lozano's death but a bit upset with Pepa's situation. But I have no worries as you said 'happy times for the girls will still be coming'. Thanks for this wonderful update.

lenageek November 11 2011, 17:54:28 UTC

I know, I just thought 'should I end this chapter here and be a sadistic SOB or keep going until I FINALLY get to happy time for the girls'? I ended up doing the former, only because I was so friggin' happy to get to a stopping point! I've been staring at the mid-point of this chapter for over four months while my muse was stuck and RL intervened, so I admit, that was most of my reason for the cliffhanger!

So sorry to upset you! Will really be wracking my brain to think of some spectacular sexy time to make up for all that I've put the girls through! :D

pepsilove64 November 11 2011, 18:58:38 UTC

Good to see you back with an update, Thanks
Glad Lozano is dead!
Can't wait for happy time for the Girls :)

lenageek November 11 2011, 20:58:37 UTC

Hola pepsilove64! It's nice to be back and writing again.

Initially, I wasn't going to kill the character of Lozano - just have Pepa barge in, kick him in the cojones and haul him away in handcuffs. When staring at the middle of the chapter for the thousandth time, I was like 'Oh hell no! This mofo's gotta die for all he did!' That's where the vicious fight scene came from. Even though Lozano's an amped up, melodramatized villian, the beliefs he holds are sadly still present in 2011 - scary thought!

Yes, happy time is coming! Working on it right now...

You're no sadistic SOB... jodief1 November 12 2011, 05:03:21 UTC

You just right awesome intensity! I'm lovin' it, though of course I'm looking forward to happy times as well. Just went back and read some of your earlier chapters to get precisely that. ;)

WHAT I ESPECIALLY LOVED about this chapter: Pepa's characterization. Her locking the others in the van gave me chills: totally LHDP territory, and in fact if I were Alex P. (and thank god I'm not - how would I live with myself?), I'd be kicking myself that I didn't write that exact scene for the show.

Also: though it's sad to have Silvia out of the action, I'm sure Marian A. would have knocked your hospital scenes out of the park too, her gorgeous red locks flowing around her (comatose) face. I'm breathless just thinking about it...

And above all, thanks for updating! I'll always be happy to read more, whether it comes in a week or a year. (But of course, if there's anything I can do to help you go for the former option, let me know...)

Re: You're no sadistic SOB... lenageek November 16 2011, 22:14:41 UTC

Hola jodief1 - thanks so much for reading and for your lovely feedback! I'm not surprised you had to go back and reread earlier chapters since I took so friggin' long in between posts. Augh!

I was surprised you loved the bit where Pepa locked the others in the van - I kinda skimmed over that part since I had no idea how she'd do it on a practical basis. I just knew that I wanted her to go after Lozano alone and have some kind of confrontation. I wasn't initially planning the fight or her shooting him to death, but after all I've put the girls through, I admit, it was rather satisfying to write!

Yes, MA would have knocked any hospital scenes out of the park - she and Laura could read a phone book and I'd be happy!

Working on the next chapter now, so there'd better not damn well be another long delay - otherwise, I'll be real mad at myself! But it's nice to have the muse back! Thanks for all your enthusiastic support! :D

Re: You're no sadistic SOB... jodief1 November 18 2011, 01:02:27 UTC

Yay! Any reply that contains the words "working on the next chapter now" is bound to get me excited! Thanks again for your great work.